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It’s more that the light has to be high to form a circle . But when i think about it . It can be low also .So i can lose the pole .
Dutch is not your thing we got about 3 words for everything.
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Hi elvisnash
the chorus is very strong. and a good base for a love song . In my head i hear
She dance she moves . Accoustic guitar
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There a lot of good lines in in the lyrics
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dear kayla I read your song lyrics. It made me a little sad. I don't know your age, but you have your whole life ahead of you. and I agree with Sidshovel. There is a lot of wonder, pain and anger in your story. I know the story behind this text. and…
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I think AI has nothing to do with God. it is and remains a programmed machine. it can be a useful tool. to solve writer's block. it's a brainstorm in a box. which can sometimes be useful. I looked at it too. in different styles. It made me laugh, su…
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it's good to hear that rainy day .is working on the song. I'm curious to the outcome.rainy is the man for a good balled. thanks for your response. glad to hear from you again
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Hi Caroll, nice to meet you again on the forum .like previous times a text that touches me .about a meeting with someone who makes you think another perspective.sometimes you find pearls between the stones love tis one.do you have someone to make it…
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astonishing and that
No comment love it -
Youre free to juse it .or alter it to make it a song.
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it is powerful.and an argument against senseless violence.a bullet too far.
I myself wrote a poem about it last year Stone Pad
April 6 2022
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Hi Elvis Nash
your text is good and not predictable. with a few good hooks. a good life lesson. so a good story. which is well presented by the music. but there is something going on with your clip on youtube. it stops halfway .I think you sho… -
Still waiting for the book 10t off november they gave it whit a turtle
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hi elvis
everything okay.. i see something in your song that i recognize. you write, compose on your own. sometimes you need people around you
.to break a circle .your lyrics are very good .and this one too .(lou reed)had this style.the … -
Thank you rainydayman l'll rejust this
And record it .course the music fits like glove now .i'm very happy how it worked out .you'll hear.ha ha
My new guitar is done today
And it sounds great .it fits my voice
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mora thanks for your response
I use Google Translate a lot, which doesn't always work well, because the structure of sentences in Dutch is different than in English. That will also be the case from Spanish to English, but it will never stop me… -
hi mora.......
your description of
heat sensation is very striking. a fly on the tongue of a frog.
i think the way you write is very direct.a very nice gift.no b..l sh.t just the way you are.and you feel.
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looking good elvis.
good hook in the trout. :)
but to make this song timeless
.would I leave brad out .or whatever name.never sell your soul to brad either.he just opend our eyes.
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hi wannabe troubadour
sorry for my late response. I lost my password. But as you can see I found it again.
thank you for your comment
i think zack brown is a very good artist.and like his approach to text
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I do own a dog .called timber
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Hi you all
I found a suitable riff today.
a beginning with which I can give the song a shape.a kind of egg that falls from the sky.I am convinced that the subconscious knows very well where it wants to go.when you play music.
I.m ordering the book to looking forward reading itThanks for your Great comment elvis
I was looking for a stronger hook in the song .i'll rewrite it again and keep your toughts in mind .my holiday starts next week then i will continue with the song .
.Thanks for your comments
Rainydayman and elvis nash
I'm sorry for my poor english
It makes me see can.t trust google translate
So it needs some thinkering
Like a chorus on the end
And some corrections
Got a very cash sound to me l love it .
It's on my playlist
And what is a brimstone ?Hi butterfly i think you hit the gong in this forum .whit this strait forward
Telling who you are song .great idea
WelkomAn other great song i've worked whit carrol to he's a great song writer
Done two songs whit him
Scars / and firefly.s
nice workIlke the old style of this song the hocky
Tonk piano sounds great whit it
And lyrics of course great workLiked your dutch elvis ... studeer hitsliedjes, het is college... made me smile
I dont whant to be famous.
I just whant to write a few good songs
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