Rewrite
hi everyone i rewrote my text
lost and found.
it has changed a bit. so also the title. but it has remained country
reverend’s wife
VERSE
There is nothing new under the sun
Just a smoking trail where i had gone
All the blackbirds kept still
As i walked my way up boot hill
Every stone my boot turned
Snapped like a fire is burnt
Snapped like a fire is burnt
CHORUS
I guess it’s the road to hell
I know it too far and to well
Course every time i go down
Hole in my heart stone in the ground
Hole in my heart stone in the ground
VERSE
One night jane stood at my door
She sad i don’t love my man no more
So there stood i in the night
Alone with the reverend’s wife
Clouds shatters moonlight that night
My love made me blind
My love made me blind
CHORUS
I guess it’s the road to hell
For what i’m gonna tell
Every time jane came round
a ring of fire burnt the ground
a ring of fire burnt the ground
VERSE
All the lizards crawled down
As word spread true town
They called her a child from hell
A hooker a jezebel
So they slowly casted their spell
So they slowly casted their spell
CHORUS
I guess it’s the road to hell
For what I’m now gonna tell
The night jane didn’t came round
I found her hanging six inch of the ground
I found her hanging six inch of the ground
VERSE
Words of the past carved in stone
Now rest upon her bones
I.m seeing smoke behind the sun
o lord what have i done
o lord what have i done
o lord she’s gone
CHORUS
I guess it’s the road to hell
I know it to far and to well
Course every time i go down
Hole in my heart stone on the ground
A stone fell through my heart ……
to the ground
And Yes it is grim
lost and found.
it has changed a bit. so also the title. but it has remained country
reverend’s wife
VERSE
There is nothing new under the sun
Just a smoking trail where i had gone
All the blackbirds kept still
As i walked my way up boot hill
Every stone my boot turned
Snapped like a fire is burnt
Snapped like a fire is burnt
CHORUS
I guess it’s the road to hell
I know it too far and to well
Course every time i go down
Hole in my heart stone in the ground
Hole in my heart stone in the ground
VERSE
One night jane stood at my door
She sad i don’t love my man no more
So there stood i in the night
Alone with the reverend’s wife
Clouds shatters moonlight that night
My love made me blind
My love made me blind
CHORUS
I guess it’s the road to hell
For what i’m gonna tell
Every time jane came round
a ring of fire burnt the ground
a ring of fire burnt the ground
VERSE
All the lizards crawled down
As word spread true town
They called her a child from hell
A hooker a jezebel
So they slowly casted their spell
So they slowly casted their spell
CHORUS
I guess it’s the road to hell
For what I’m now gonna tell
The night jane didn’t came round
I found her hanging six inch of the ground
I found her hanging six inch of the ground
VERSE
Words of the past carved in stone
Now rest upon her bones
I.m seeing smoke behind the sun
o lord what have i done
o lord what have i done
o lord she’s gone
CHORUS
I guess it’s the road to hell
I know it to far and to well
Course every time i go down
Hole in my heart stone on the ground
A stone fell through my heart ……
to the ground
And Yes it is grim
1
Comments
-
My level of English is low, I almost always use the same words hahaha, that's why I can't criticize or help you with your lyric, but I can tell you that I like it. @rewrite
0 -
mora thanks for your response
I use Google Translate a lot, which doesn't always work well, because the structure of sentences in Dutch is different than in English. That will also be the case from Spanish to English, but it will never stop me.
I still have to see when I can record it, but that will be fine. The music is ready.1 -
Nice! I particularly like: "Hole in my heart stone in the ground"
Just a few typos:
As word spread true town ➡️ As word spread through town
So they slowly casted their spell ➡️ So they slowly cast their spell
six inch of the ground ➡️ six inches off the ground, (though "inch" still sounds good even if it's not grammatically correct)
I know it to far and to well ➡️ I know it too far and too well
Course every time i go down ➡️ 'Cause every time i go down
0 -
Thank you rainydayman l'll rejust this
And record it .course the music fits like glove now .i'm very happy how it worked out .you'll hear.ha ha
My new guitar is done today
And it sounds great .it fits my voice
Made whit a ash top and back mahony sides and a purple wood
Neck .fretboard from tygerwood
It stiil need some rejusting but it
Be oke in a while.0
Howdy, Stranger!