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Yep, I knew that one was coming! It is a squeeze, but I still kinda like it.
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Very true! A dog and a stick go a long way! Good fun song with a deceptively simple message
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Good sound! Like the feel of it. Strong pop vibe.
I found the vocal a little unclear - but that could just be my old ears! Also, the lyric is probably secondary to the music in this song. If you'd like comments on the lyric it's best to pos…
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Oh no! My secret is out! 😉
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Hummer, I like to see how a song develops, and posting a new version here on this thread is what I'd do, but you won't be breaking any rules if you end up posting a new version separately.
I particularly like these lines:
Bu…
You're fine @StoneFlowers ! No problem with another dog song!
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You sure cover some territory Joseph!
Reading the chorus, I found myself saying "Born a rebel always WILL be" so you might try that out - but it will also depend on what music it's set to.
I'd say you're getting your message across loud and clear!
Ooh it's on! Battle of the bards!
Well this is strong too, but very different feel.
I like how the beer, whiskey and wine give structure to the song.
And a nice play on a "dog's life".
Good stuff!
This is really nice. Sweet and simple, and it works.
My favorite line is:
Now, it’s hard to say just who rescued who
I'd probably go for a different line 2 in the chorus and save the repeat till the end. So…
I think you could use pipe and strike anyway - but that's a matter of preference, I don't mind near rhymes.
Classic!
I enjoyed that very much.
I like the more poetic style in the lyric.
Like the vibe and the variation in the singing and music.
Hope the moon gives you some more tunes!
Interesting theme! Novelty factor there got my attention.
Not sure I really understand the lyric, but there's a feeling of cynicism and bitterness about modern life coming through.
I think the "You can't swindle a saint" part works b…
The chorus came out very well. Got a real sing a long factor.
"Last call" feels a bit squished in there. I think it would sound fine without it.
I like the bridge in there for variation. The words feel a bit out of context with the re…
Feels like it might work well in a comedic style.
Was that meant to be "coming down the pipe"?
Be interested to see how it all comes out!
I like this overall, but the "unlike Amelia" grates on me, cause it feels contrived- like it's there purely for the rhyme, cause otherwise Amelia doesn't even make an appearance. I think you should try for something else there. Given the alcohol …
That came together nicely Renee. Got a good feel to it.
Cool!
Looking pretty good as is, Renee!
When you get to setting this to music and come to this line: "Now, I’m nobody...." you might try out both "nobody" and "no one" and hear which one sounds better. I think "nobody" feels like it's in the styl…
Ok. We'll give that a try. Not sure about the posting part, but we can see what songs people come up with. 1st Dec seems a good day to begin (Australian time!)
Try it out, see if you like it. Any suggestion from me is simply: have you thought about ...? But you should always make the decisions. It's your song!
Thanks Renee. Fortunately for me, not a true story!
Matt Henderson has some great songs. This is the first one I heard from him, and still my favorite.
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Strong message and I'm liking the groove here.
As a suggestion, in your chorus you might consider using Wars don't happen x 3 then coming almost to a complete stop, then kicking back into the groove on "by accident"
You do well in this bluesy style! I think it works a treat.
Oh I love this one! What a great metaphor. I think everyone can empathize with looking back a younger self.
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