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Classic country!
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Love the lead on the intro.
Great rhythm as you get into the verses.
I think this one is more about mood than story, and nothing wrong with that! Does it well.
And a great outro too!
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Susie Almeida has a wonderful voice! And this is lovely. The whole Septet does a great job.
I like those internal rhymes in the verses. So smooth and rewarding to the ear.
Lovely stuff.
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You've put a lot of thought into the arrangement for this. The syncopated rhythm for the verses for example.
And the nice contrast of the chorus. Longer drawn out notes and chords.
"Tears bleed red" is a really evocative line…
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Your slow easy style is a good fit to this lyric.
That last verse certainly ups the ante on the weight of the song! Not arguing with the message though.
In v1 "Give it a push no asking why" felt a touch crowded, though not badly. Perh…
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I was thinking exactly the same as Elvis! Haven't heard this one in years.
Nice blast from the past :)
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How could you listen to that without your toes tapping?
What a lovely song to sit down and chill out to.
Put a smile on my face!
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If this was done by a boy band I can imagine teenagers swooning over it!
Came out really well. Nice change of pace!
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Nice! Strong driving beat. And a really solid lyric. Really like how v1 brings it immediately into focus. And the changing meanings around "It ain't me" - really polished.
Could be just me, but I think your own voice might suit this better…
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Enjoyed the syncopation on this one! Nice relaxed vibe to it, which is a good fit I guess for an Ocean Wave!
I like the big sound and the layered vocals too. Great to chillax to.
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Lovely stuff. My fav lines:
making me moan and whisper
as if I were a guitar
Desire indeed!
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Nice contrast between the verses and the chorus.
Can't argue with the message! Singing makes me feel better :)
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Might as well Elvis! Nothing to lose and the potential to be heard.
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I hadn't heard that one before. Thanks for sharing it!
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Interesting. Thank for sharing Bill!
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I love the cynicism in this one, somewhat tempered by the post-chorus. I think it works really well
And the style is perfect. Good write!
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It's unclear to me which truth you're referring to here, and I think it needs that to punch hard.
There's a few biblical references there, so maybe it's about the emptiness of religion? Probably not the best choice from a commercial standpo…
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Definitely has potential. No problem starting with the music first
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What a ripper! I love this. Great feel to it, starting with that strong lyric.
"A bucket full of lessons" is a lovely title and hook. And you've got the mood down perfectly to match it.
Lovely stuff Elvis!
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Quite a pop vibe in this one!
Very nice Mora! Enjoyed that :)
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I like it. I think this works very well. Like the dynamic changes in there and the vocal is very smooth.
BTW, would you mind posting the lyric here on TSF as well as the music link please? Makes it much easier to comment on that aspect.
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I like how this starts. But when it gets to "It's getting harder to reconcile" (and similar later on) it feels like it should go stronger and more upbeat to me, whereas it goes quieter. But just one opinion I realize.
Lyrically I'm afraid I…
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Indeed! But you have to go back a long way to find that common ancestor!
I like the variations in the chorus.
I think the rhythm really carries it along
Yes ,nice outro there too.
Good stuff.
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I like the contrasts, the soaring female vocals, the deep gravelly male vocal, the choir and the synths.
But it still feels whole and integrated. As a style I think it works well.
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Nice to see Linda back, and doing a fine job! And of course underpinned by Dr. Pepper and His Soda Pop Orchestra.
Really enjoyed that, and feels genuinely of the era.
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I like the message. Sitting around counting time is no way to live!
Doesn't feel quite as smooth as some of your others. A few syllables awkward in places. Course that could just be Suno.
"Dreams like old tattoos, some don’t ever go."…
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Ah! I was wondering what the language was, hadn't gotten to looking into it.
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This is good Elvis! Some lovely lines in there, too many to repeat, but the first one that caught my eye was:
He wore confidence like a leather holster
The mood is gritty and down to earth, but some of the phras…
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Very nice love song, assuming the translation got it right, and I have no reason to think it wouldn't.
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I've never had that urge! And these days everyone should be glad for that!
Howdy, Stranger!