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Like this a lot. Like how the post chorus gives us the truth.
It's got attitude the whole way through.
Very good indeed.
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I hear it as a set of different scenes and in each one something coming atcha
Always enjoy your guitar work!
Nice song. Enjoyed my listen.
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Some foot tapping rhythm there. Seems like a good fit to the lyric.
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Not sure this one is coming off, or at least it's not working for me.
I'm not getting either a storyline or an emotion from it. At the end of it, I'm not sure what it is about or why I should care.
There is a lot of change and dynamic…
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I don't why angels have to leave the choir either, but it sure sings well, and that's the main thing!
Feels very smooth to me Elvis. Found my head bobbing along to it.
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I like this. Good feel to it. The style you're getting fits the mysticism of the lyric.
The way Suno is singing "Silent water deep grounds" bothers me though. I think it needs a pause between those phrases. Maybe put a comma in there and se…
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Regret for what we didn't do. I think a lot of people will empathize with this!
Not too heavy, and a nice groove. Straight pop song.
I like that it's the Spyhouse Coffee Shop. The extra detail…
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I like the driving drums in the chorus.
I also liked this line: "Me—I make peace with the smoke and wait"
though I thought maybe "sweat on your face" rather than "sweat on your fate".
Bit dark for me overall.
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Both good versions. But you get the male / female swap with Suno, and the extra polish. Though sometimes it's the flaws that make it feel real. I enjoyed both.
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I think it leans into soul / funk, but it feels pop/dance too, and that's no bad thing.
I'd love to hear a bit more variation in the vocal melody, and I think there's room to make that more soul/funky too if you wanted to.
I wasn't su…
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Neat angle! haven't seen one like that before. Nice!
Only line that didn't work for me was: "I said “I’m broke,” she said “Define broke” - felt just a tad clumsy. But the rest are smooth.
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Feels like an emphasis on rhyme on this one. I didn't really understand it, but maybe it's more of a mood thing.
The music certainly came out well, and is a good match for your lyric.
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Has an operatic feel to me. Epic and dramatic. Very story driven.
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That's a cool experiment. Combo of rap and country. Works well too.
Got a cynical, bitter feel to it. That might put some people off, but others will love it. It's certainly got attitude!
I think you're onto something here.
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At my age those moments are getting fewer indeed! Nice clear message.
I like what Suno has done with your chorus here. Really grabs my attention.
Good mix of driving beats, orchestral sounds and that ethereal voice.
Enjoyed thi…
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Wild! And so theatrical! Strong story line. This should be on stage as part of a musical.
I think it works very well indeed.
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In terms of difficulty, your song is probably not one for an absolute beginner, but it shouldn't be too bad. The tempo is on the slower side, which makes the chord changes easier, and the lead riffs seem to have only 1 note at a time, mainly on t…
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Strong story! I like the finger picking off the original, and the vocal off the new.There's always the option of getting Suno to split it into multiple tracks and mixing and matching between the two versions, but maybe that's just extra work for …
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The impression I get is of a woman, shy and delicate, but oh so passionate! And in these words she opens herself entirely to her man, inviting him to become one with her.
So many lovely lines here:
Love me like a stranger, ... free f…
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Wonderful groove and vibe. Seems like a tight fit to your lyric.
I love the "ready to live" hook. Feels so positive. The butterfly metaphor too. I hope it's how you are feeling!
The verses seem more conversational in style, whilst the…
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This is such a sweet song, and a sweet melody to go with it!
It's really nice Guy! As Tammy says, who wouldn't want to have this song written for them?
Lovely!
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It's an interesting thought that each life might simply transition into another endlessly. Not sure if that is comforting or horrifying!
Not often you see Laplace's name come up in a lyric! ;)
Music is a strong match to the lyric, ver…
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Love that dirty, bluesy guitar! Good song overall.
Not sure about the labelling you're using here for the various parts - not that it matters! The 'A-carrying me" part feels like the chorus to me, with the part before that being a pre-chor…
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If you're singing this live, I think it's likely to come out sounding more like broodin' just because that's easier to sing. But I actually like the full 'brooding' version, which might be fine in a studio wh…
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Nice! I like the chill vibe. At first I was wondering if it was at odds with the lyric, but then they turn a corner and it's about choosing to be smart and positive and they came together.
(and thanks for posting the lyric!)
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I like the funky groove and the lighter tone.
What's the intro line about? Were you originally considering a country and western style or this part of the story?
Interesting that you've chosen "Bring the Funk" rather than "Don't Brin…
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I like the new version more. It feels more creative. Nothing wrong with the original, but it's less distinct.
The new version is a bit choppy and staccato and maybe that's putting some people off, not sure. But it works for me!
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This one's got a ton of atmosphere via the backing music. Like a wail.
Some lovely lyrics too. Verse 1, and verse 3 are particularly good. And of course your title and hook.
Good stuff, Elvis.
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