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Re: Way Out
Really easy to imagine people singing along with the "Way out"s. Could definitely have the anthemic feel you're going for. At the start of the chorus I found myself saying "I'm going o… (View Post)1 -
Re: Called me butterfly
great to see a post from you Ian! Yes this one is all about emotion rather than story - that's up to the listener. The bit that really touches me is your 'C' part, the bridge. "I'll find my plac… (View Post)1 -
Re: That's How It Goes
Ok guys, let's ease back a little please. To clarify the site rules: If AI has been used on the track, that should be noted in the post, specifying how - lyrics, music creation, or as a cover of your… (View Post)1 -
Re: MY LITTLE SUNSHINE (Uke)
For me, this one hits its straps at V2. The specifics of the dances etc land well. I found V1 a little too generic. The other thing I'd point to is that the "sunshine" metaphor is barely ut… (View Post)1 -
Re: Awake - Angie Handley and Steve Lintern
Your singer is excellent! And I like the song. The only thing I would be careful of is the backing instrumentation. A lot of the song is stepping between two chords (D & C?) and that's a bit repe… (View Post)2
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