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Really easy to imagine people singing along with the "Way out"s. Could definitely have the anthemic feel you're going for.
At the start of the chorus I found myself saying "I'm going out, way out" then realizing that wasn't what was written…
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There are many ideas floating out there. You have to see them, then act on it. I think you can claim this as yours!
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Nice!
Yeah the truth don’t shine like diamonds…
It looks more like scars
and this
Every crack in your armor
Is where you learned to bend
I think this is a good one El…
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Do you know where I can get a good price on red hood robes? 😂
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That's a really sweet lyric! A down to earth, homely, natural kind of relationship song.
I read the lyric first, and I have to say the music surprised me. I think I was expecting a slower country swing waltz or something more like that. But…
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Is that a phrase you created yourself, or is something out there that I'm unaware of?
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Love the syncopation! And yeah, it really is a cool sound! Only thing I'd like to hear is a bit more bass.
I think the lyric is secondary here, but it all flows, and the timing is nicely in sync with the music - very smooth.
I enjoyed…
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Always nice when SUNO can provide the female vocal a song needs
yes. Pretty magical what we can do these days! I've used it that way too.
This sounds really good, and that really is most of the battle.
Yep, could certainly be brother/sister. That would make 'Since the day they both turned one ' make sense, if they were twins turning one together.
Actually I think it fits, just that logically it doesn't mean much - but logic is overrated!
"Engine knocking time as the miles roll by" what a lovely descriptive line!
"Neon in the window hums out of key" I didn't understand that one.
I like the "three chords away from heaven" theme. I think you've used the musical reference…
Or at least one. Childhood friends / sweethearts. They made a deal that she could be part of whatever he was doing, though he often broke that deal and "went on ahead".
As adults she gets the phone call from him. He's likely OD'd and "goin…
We all see different things 😁 That's why it's good to get different opinions!
For the names, maybe even "Ginny" and "James"? Very close to what you have but just a little less trope. But I don't doubt you can choose your own names!!
Agree about the time limits! But it's the constraints that bring out the magic. How do I condense what could be pages of text into a single verse? When you can, it is amazing!
I'm sorry to hear about your finger - but that is such a cool story! It's like the music called out to you.
Wow, that's a tear jerker!
Love the opening, in 2 lines you know where we are heading. By the end of the verse we are in love with her.
"Sky-blue eyes, never feared goodbye" love the sound of that.
Like how the bridge …
I really like that guitar riff and chord sequence. It's straight forward, but it just works and gets you in.
The lyric is good, but it's the music that makes it stand out to me - and it does stand out, it's a good one.
My dog is 14 and isn't likely to make 15. He really acts like an old dog now. But he's still got a wag in his tail and an appetite.
Mind the language please Elvis! But yes, stay clear of casinos, they are purpose built to fleece you.
Great recording! Very professional and polished.
Good structure to the song. Like how you're ending the chorus on your hook - gives it emphasis. And there's definitely progression in the storyline from childhood to addict.
Not sure ab…
Congratulations! I think you ticked all the boxes on this one!
@bhengen Bill, your comment is disrespectful towards another TSF member, and that is not acceptable.
You c…
great to see a post from you Ian!
Yes this one is all about emotion rather than story - that's up to the listener.
The bit that really touches me is your 'C' part, the bridge. "I'll find my place in the shadows" is such a bleak line.<…
Elvis, this reads as an intensely personal lyric to me. It's a question I'd put to Martha directly via private chat.
No I didn't get that either. Someone who is trans themselves or knows a friend etc might pick that up, I don't think a general audience would. If you want that to come across clearly you might need to make a change. Otherwise it can be a sort of …
Hi Marsha and welcome to the forum!
That's an intense lyric. The line that really grabbed me was: "I don’t wanna know and that’s my defense". It's a strong hook, and great that it's got your title in it.
I like how you open. It sets t…
I read it as an old girlfriend (Jane) trying to reconnect with her beau.
Jane has changed her look and the boy is pretending not to recognize her.
I have no issue with the process you've described. Whether it continues that way we will learn as we go.
AI generation also allows people to change how music is distributed - bypass Nashville et al altogether, post it directly to the web, s…
Me too!
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