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I remember this one. This is a good version of it, but so was your original!
Love the emotion in it, and the dynamic build.
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Definitely a truth bomb here!
I'm a bit worried that the hook isn't strong enough to get people singing along with it (if it's intended for commercial use), but as the others said, you can't argue with it!
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Well, now I do! Thanks for sharing the link. Solid, but not iconic.
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I enjoyed that a lot! Like the vibe and mood of the music, with the pan pipes feeling very appropriate.
And the Arcadian references felt familiar and comfortable.
Good stuff.
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Good one. I can feel the emotion in it. For me the best part is the start of the chorus:
Screw this
All you do is put out our light
that hits hard!
Good structure to it, and the message is loud and cl…
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Ok guys, let's ease back a little please.
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If AI has been used on the track, that should be noted in the post, specifying how - lyrics, music creation, or as a cover of your own music. That way if anyone is d…
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Feelin’ the weight of my blue-collar shirt
that's a lovely line!
This one's on brand. Very approachable too. Lot of people will nod their heads to this one.
I think the music needs a bit more backing. Some…
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Have to admit I don't know any.
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Not sure the doubled vocals are helping you in this one, just makes it a little less clear. I'd use them sparingly for the harmonies and the chorus.
In the chorus, I'd be tempted to change line 3. Introduce a little variety there without ch…
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Wonderful irony!
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Your singer is excellent! And I like the song.
The only thing I would be careful of is the backing instrumentation. A lot of the song is stepping between two chords (D & C?) and that's a bit repetitive. You do bring in additional instr…
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This one feels very specific to your relationship, which is an absolute strength when you're writing it to give her on an anniversary! But can make it a little harder for a more general listener to put themselves into the picture. But the latter …
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"Ready to run" lands well. I can imagine that getting stuck in the brain.
The rest of the song is easy on the ear, but to be honest, a bit forgettable. I don't think you've found an angle here to make it stand out.
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For me, this one hits its straps at V2. The specifics of the dances etc land well. I found V1 a little too generic.
The other thing I'd point to is that the "sunshine" metaphor is barely utilized. Beyond "You're my little sunshine" there's …
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Quite the vocal performance in that track! It's a good song too, enjoyed that! :)
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The AI covers of songs are often really impressive. They're my favorite AI thing. I've done a few of my own. Whilst you usually need to do 3 or 4 to get a version you're really happy with, when you do it's just a notch above anything you could do…
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We're all human, and we all have regrets. You didn't do it knowingly, and you already know that! Some things we just have to live with. The trick is to learn from them and remember for a different occasion.
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Interesting! Got a haunting feeling to it.
The chorus feels like it should swell to me. The vocal already builds there, but the instrumentation stays sparse. I think it should come in stronger, which would allow it to drop out at the end of…
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That's one to tug at the heartstrings! Regret, guilt and sadness. And a life lesson for the listener.
I think you've done well here. Message is very clear, and it's really easy to put yourself into the position of the singer.
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There's so much honesty and tenderness in this one. I think it touches the heart. There's real depth to it.
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Wonderful title!
Love the theatrical vibe to it. This could be on a stage (or in a court!).
You use the word "sensually" and that's the feeling I'd use to describe it.
As usual, I don't really understand it, but it makes me want…
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Catchy title! Very intriguing.
"They sell dreams between the commercials" - oh that's a nice line!
Strong chorus. And on brand for you too.
It's a good'un.
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Oh no! I saw the video was down, but the whole channel? Man, that sucks.
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Very Meta! Couldn't get into this one I'm afraid.
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I like the music. Strong beat helps there, but it's quite compelling overall.
I like the poetic nature of the lyric, but even with your explanation I have troubling marrying it up. It's likely going to be beyond most people.
But I'm h…
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Easy to get behind the message in this one!
The backing is almost too minimalist for me in this one - and I like guitar+vocal songs! But it does build up nicely in the middle before coming down again.
It's a strong track.
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Yes, that came up a treat with the Suno treatment!
Very rewarding to hear your song taken up to a pro level. 😁
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I feel like the core of the song is:
I’m sitting at a crossroads and I don’t know which direction to go.
And I'd try to build the chorus around that. Maybe something like:
I’m sitting at a crossro…
Nice. Liked these lines:
Laid her head against my heart
Like she owned that place
I like the motif, and the story structure. But it feels like V3 should be the final woman. Having a good one walk away doesn…
If you're after someone to listen to, I'd recommend Joshua Lee Turner, either on his own, or as part of The Other Favorites, or with Allison Young as The Bygones.
Here's a link to an album Unamericana on spotify: in Great Acoustic Folk Rock Singer/songwriters Comment by RainyDayMan March 28
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