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Yep, the "Nothin but crumbs" line works. I'm less sure of "With my chin on my shoulder" that doesn't tell me as much, but overall there's a story and a message there.
Good rhythm to it, and very easy to listen to!
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Wild video! Don't think I've seen that before though the song was familiar once we got past the intro. Don't mind Tom Petty.
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Nice! Straightforward lyric, and nothing wrong with that!
Not sure out "humdinger", maybe "beauty"? though it's not as memorable.
I can imagine this going down well at an Open Mic, not commercial, but easy listening.
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A bit heavier than some of your others. Skillful playing as always.
I don't mind the psychological lyrics. Feels like there could be room to build and expand on them in the second verse rather than the direct repeat.
Not necessarily m…
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I enjoyed this so much! Got me in right away. Those first two lines put a smile on my face:
Aren't you a silly man
For making something out of nothing just because you can
I feel like that sums up my songwr…
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Hi Renee! Nice to meet you!
I think your song works a treat. All the little details like the $100 for groceries really ground it.
I expect there's a whole lot of people who are going to nod and feel exactly like you're describing.
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Most people know that “Staying Alive” can be used as the bpm for CPR but “Another One Bites the Dust” can also be used if you’re feeling morbid
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Talented lady!
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I think it's time to close this thread Rob. We're a music site. If anyone wishes to discuss it further with you they can do so via PM.
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This is a real rhythmic piece. Very much suited to dancing, in the rain or otherwise!
Hope you can chase that fog away soon.
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Yes, I do that as well. I think overall it's a benefit, though unconsciously I think the timing is better when playing both together.
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I can understand your dilemma in getting helpful feedback! Not writing in this genre, I can see that you have skill, but I really don't know how to advise you to improve upon it. It's a popular genre, so there must be others out there writing son…
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Can I ask how the title comes about?
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Very cool!
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Here's another one that sticks in my mind. Written about the Covid lockdown: Mr Distance by Shrimptastic
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Wow! What a switch up at the 1 min mark. Couldn't get more contrast from the elec overdriven guitar to the acoustic. And then back again.
I think the music is the star here, as it often is in your songs.
The lyric isn't conveying a w…
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Love the quiet vocal. There's so much mood and atmosphere in this that it's perfect. And that instrument you described is wild!
"Daily cup of morning fear" -oh ouch! What a line.
I like this a lot.
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Wow! That's some service! Kudos to him! Thanks for sharing this, it's really helpful to hear from someone actually using a device in the wild.
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Lovely to hear it as you meant it to be!
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Smooth as butter.
I really liked your rhymes with night, sight, might moving further into the middle of each line.
I might have the vocals a bit more forward in the mix, but I really think that's just personal preference, there's noth…
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I think it's amazing they can create anything at all! But yes, it's high variable on the output quality, and the level of control over the result is limited. It would be much better if you could specify elements such as the vocalist, instruments,…
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Oh that is bad! I hadn't heard that one before and won't again.
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We're ok at the moment I think Chris. People can still apply, but they need to be approved by me first. I'm getting about 50 bot applications a day, but those are (currently) easy to spot so it's not taking me long. Only issue might be if I'm awa…
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Strong song! Really quality sound both in the performance and the mix.
Like the way you sing " somethings just not right" I was hoping you would pause on each word just as you did.
The instrumental is a real change of pace, but I like…
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So you wrote and performed the music? Then you've done the strongest part of the song!
The vocal sound is a good fit to the feel of the song though the lyric itself might be a little repetitive. But even that is probably appropriate to the…
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The lyric feels angrier than the AI version of the music to me. You might try for something a bit heavier and up tempo.
I'd prefer what you have as verse 4 to be the bridge, and maybe cut the length a little.
Not sure about the outro,…
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I always enjoy your songs Paulina! I like the simplicity of just you and the guitar and the purity of your voice.
This one feels like a Grand Tour, musically - so much variety!
It starts off with the blues, then getting to Paris chang…
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I like the acoustic guitar on this track, works well and good fit stylistically.
Feels like a stronger narrative in the lyric on this one too, and really painting a (bleak) picture.
This is one of my favorites of yours.
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Nice message! Chorus has that sing a long factor to it which is great.
When you get to "So I’m here to sing along" it feels like that would be a good lead back into the chorus. Maybe put the break in after that?
Good …
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@highvibrational No, the vocals weren't doubled, but there is a good amount of reverb on them. Glad …
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