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Love the story. It's a good one!
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This is a proofread version.
“Prayer”
Two eyes are not enough
to read everything in everyone.
Give me yours,
Chenrezig.
Two hands are just too few
for what in my plans I have to do.
Gi…
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Hey there Yeahbuddy.... this is fine. love it. Put a big smile on my face.
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That works pretty we…
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I love it, Elvis. Has an easy listening tone to it.... a great venture from the country sound you have.
I really like this!
Bravo!!! My kind of song!
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Hey there, Yeahbuddy... It rambles on quite nicely. Not too much to read into the story, however. It's much like many of the bar and grills in Texas and Cali. It needs some story that sets it apart. As well written as it is, it reads like the int…
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Thank you, Rainy, fo…
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Why would I worry ? …
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I like the idea of e…
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"Alleluia,…
That's a real good s…
I'm still trying to …
Well, I sure liked this!
Some of the lyrics are just a bit "off" but I don't think anyone would ever notice. But that's just me being Catholic. For instance, there wouldn't be any faith if there was no mystery 😉
It may be well worn.…
You are just guessin…
Anything that keeps …
It was a blanket sta…
How about no tax on …
It's the discussions…
No taxes on tips, SS, and OT would be a great help!
Ya buddy...there are no atheists in a fox hole!
Good one!
I sure like the lyrics!
So did I. There was …
"Well I watch funny cat and dog videos"
Oh... you're one of those 😗
Went fishing last evening...... the bass are in early... yippie!!
Let me rephrase.... …
Hi Elvis... Love the title... The lyrics are fine, but this waltz pace is killing me. Seems to be saying a lot in a slow cadence.
Nice guitar solo! Who'd ya get... David Gilmore?
I've never had problems sleeping......And I sleep even better know (obvious reasons) 😁
I sleep like a baby. Be it fishing or songwriting.... it's all about the hook.
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