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Re: The Emperor's New Wallet
OHHHH I do like it! I wish it to be more pointed and sharp... with some barbs attached. Good premise... good stuff! (View Post)1 -
Re: My Fair-Weather Friends… Birds of a Feather
I appreciate you critiquing the lyric, and it would be most helpful if you could elaborate on those lines you couldn't understand. Thanks (View Post)1 -
Re: Living in Jubilation
LOL... This is very cool. Not sure about it being a "Christian" song, but it surely is fun. Love the bouncing bass, and your vocal brings a very... ???... I actually don't have the words to… (View Post)1 -
Re: My Fair-Weather Friends… Birds of a Feather
Thanks for stopping by! Not sure as to which lines threw you for a loop. It's not overly metaphoric or poetic. There's a lot a blues / Jazz performer could do with this. I don't believe it need anoth… (View Post)2 -
Re: Concrete Flower
I really like the lyric. Great words of resilience and resolve. Reminded me a bit of Tupoc. Good stuff! (View Post)2
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