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OHHHH I do like it!
I wish it to be more pointed and sharp... with some barbs attached.
Good premise... good stuff!
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Nice song Gavin. Very soothing, and a wonderful sentiment!
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"pros know a lot"
Hi Gavin, and thanks…
Hi Elvis... what in …
'Cmon Elvis... I abs…
Have you ever heard …
Fun stuff, Hummer. T…
Well... thanks Tammy. Seems like scrambled eggs. You are right, "different writing styles" It's all good... thanks for the explanation.
God bless,
-T
I appreciate you cri…
Nice song, Elvis... is the lyric yours?
I didn't see any credits.
Are you going to pitch this one? Sounds like a winner 😎
I don't pitch songs.…
Thanks for stopping …
Hi rainy, and thanks…
Harkens back to the late 50's and early 60's. Oh, they must have been the days.
Lovely tune, Tom!
I really like the lyric. Great words of resilience and resolve.
Reminded me a bit of Tupoc.
Good stuff!
LOL... This is very cool. Not sure about it being a "Christian" song, but it surely is fun. Love the bouncing bass, and your vocal brings a very... ???... I actually don't have the words to describe the tone your vocal brings. It's cool! 😎
Nice one... as always!
Good stuff, Guy 😁
Hey there DR... nice to see ya!
Love the song, man! It's a good write, and your performance is believable. You look good... No deer in the headlights with you! LOL
Are you sure that the video isn't A.I?
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The poetry escaped m…
Hi B... Your writing is technically as good as anyone's! I just don't get what possessed you to write this down as a song lyric. Reading the lyric leaves me in a dust cloud. The craft is there for all to see, I just don't really get it. Is this a…
A super lyric... it's nice to be noticed, every once in a while!
Congratulations.
Hey there Rainy.... the melody reminds me of "Sweet Child of Mine"
Very nice! Love the lyric.
Thanks for stopping by, Chris.
I'm glad you like it. Most don't appreciate the folksy, sing-a-longs type genre... maybe, if I had SUNO produce it, there would be more interest.
oh boy... I can't wa…
I won't comment on non-organic, artificially generated music, but the lyric is stunning.
WOW.... I didn't know you felt this way. I'm so sorry.
Loving it!
I love the premise... but there's just not enough in there.... maybe, describe some of the daily sufferings that come upon us.... describe how we persevere through those sufferings.
Maye, if you added some birdsong it would make better sens…
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