Once
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“Once”
Words & Music by Tom Tognaci
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I
Once, can be forgiven!
What kind of fool am I!
What kind of fool am I?
Who makes mountains high
Against the vast blue sky?
Who’d make the world feel small
Just to hear it’s cry?
II
Once, I had forgotten
How to forgive with time
What kind of man am I
If I can’t turn time
If I can’t rewind
If I can’t let go
To put it all behind?
What Kind of man am I?
What Kind of man am I?
What Kind of man am I?
What Kind of man am I?
Outro
Once, we were as lovers
Two mirrored souls in love
Comments
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Oh that's heartbreaker. A wail of emotion.
It's a great song Tom. I knew it was going to be, just reading the lyric. They're all strong lines.
Lovely guitar picking, and I love the dynamic build over the song.
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I'm kinda lost , Your talking about God forgiving you , but end with two lovers
Sounds powerful though
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Thank you, Rainy, for the glowing crit!
I'm questioning myself for my unforgiving nature.
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