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@icystorm Careful, Bro. You may be branded a "deplorable piece of ***" :)
@HummerWisdom I am not personally offended by the song, and I have not called anyone any names. My cr…
This isn't a song about the history of religion or even a song critical of religion, per se. This is a 2025 song that insults and offends whole swaths of people as being hateful just because they are of a particular religious faith. If…
And the Catholics hate on the Protestants
And the Protestants hate on the Catholics
And the Mormons seem to hate everybody
My take on this . . .
Arrogant.
Ignorant.
Offen…
I think "views" probably includes both members and non-members just peering in from the internet. So, the number of "views" will always be substantially larger than the number of "comments" that can only be posted by members. In my opinion, it …
Thanks, everyone. My apologies for posting this song to this board "for review," I really only wanted to vent about how sick of winter I am, because at the time, it was really getting to me, and I thought by sharing this song with othe…
@bhengen You, me, and everyone only exists here on this forum "digitally." We might be nothing but the digital a…
FWIW, I personally think this lyric uses "shadow"/"shadows" a bit too often. So much so, that I wonder if using "shadow" or "shadows" in the title might make sense. Also, while I'm on the subject of shadows, a shadow (singular)"conceal…
Strong lyric. Kudos. I'm not crazy abut the music or the singing. But, at least they're real, and I do appreciate that. It gets a little tiresome clicking on things here just to discover another AI waste of my time. :)
It seems to me the line should be "I'm up here" instead of "I'm up there."
When you say x "against" y, you're at least implying if not stating that x is the aggressor and y is the victim of y's aggression. That's not problematic for two sisters or two brothers, but in an
FWIW, before you decide to upload your lyrics to Suno, you probably should have a good understanding of just how broad of a forever non-revocable license you are giving Suno with respect to your lyrics. The "fine print" in any platform'…
Hell, I can even have de…
Kudos for seeing your project through to the end. But, CD's? Cars don't even have CD players anymore. If you want to offer a physical musical product, you might want to consider vinyl records instead. Vinyl now outsells CD's, and a 12-inch vi…
FWIW, I don't think the first verse is a well-written as the rest of the lyric. You rhyme "words" with "downwards," and for me, the analogy of unchained emotions and words crashing like raging waves against the shore says pretty much t…
I think it's a cool song with a cool vibe. You could use this as a start and further build the arrangement with other uke tracks and other instruments/sounds. For example, you could start with the centered main uke riff alone as an intro before…
Yes! I'm excited for yo…
A "DAW" is Digital Audio Workstation software. Do you have a decent desktop or laptop computer with a USB input? If not, in my opinion that should be the first bullet you should bite for your music.
For reference, I have many songs that I…
@StoneFlowers You've got really good acoustic guitar, vocal, and lyrical chops. On your Soundcloud, …
I always start with the sound of something rhythmically musical - a chord progression, a riff, or even just a drum beat - and that start is always something that I actually hear because I'm playing it live or I'm playin…
Good tune! FWIW, if it were my song, I might want to switch things around in the choruses and pace the "oo" and "ay" rhymes out a bit differently so that the choruses and the song itself end with the title/hook:
I owed a piece of heart to …
While I'm certainly no fan of Elon Musk or his Tesla cars, all Teslas sold in the U.S. are made in the USA - none are imported for sale in the U.S. So, you may want to rethink that verse?
David
Though the original poster has been deleted, FWIW to anyone else, here's what I think.
That you can hear that your singing off key - that you're not "tone deaf," is a very positive thing. If your singing is only moderate…
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