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Writing together? Mhh we can give it a try. As soon as I find myself in the mood for gospel and prais I’ll try to write something and send it to you. Maybe you have some ideas on your sleeve and AI technology will make it work. I ve never been one o…
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Hey,
It’s all good and I do understand what you talk about. It has always this kind of connection to words like „thy“ most famous for „thy will be done“ (a very good song by a Norwegian gospel writer, I like to sing it). And I guess that’s it,… -
Thank you very much guys!
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Thanks Sid, I must say this really is a hard one for me but somehow I got the feeling that I had to write it. At least try it. And that’s usually when I am about to write songlyrics. Poems are not that kind of hard work and I guess that’s why I’m st…
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Tyvm Sid!
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Thanks for your encouragement Owen! Infact I considered „speak“ but you know I think it will happen when it finally meets its music, so it’s not written in stone yet.
I will think about restructuring B, maybe I get a better vision when I’m fu… -
Hey Owen, I think you don’t even need a real time face to face chat for what I mean, you can also post stuff below or talk in pms about it. Same as we do below our own stuff we could go ahead and analyze songs of artists we like, or songs in a style…
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We do it by growing through feedback and working together on songs. Through ideas and exchange of thoughts. Not by: your lyrics are fine but I can write them better than you…or by discussing if we should use AI or not. To me sometimes the small thin…
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Hey Sid,
I like this one, specially the chorus. It gives a real country feeling. The bridge was very surprising at first but I think a „lil drama“ like this makes a good country song. 😅
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Tyvm sid
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Ty Owen
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Well why not?
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Ty for your time Sid. Like I said it’s a very old one and I guess I used it as a technical task to get better.
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Merci Chris!
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Ty Owen!
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Ty pry !
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Tyvm Sid!
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Yep! Very good! I like the rock vibe u put it into!
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I just read this one and it’s very good! I especially like those parts inbetween:
There's a coldness, in your touch
Your thoughts, are a million miles away…
Gives a very harsh feeling.
The other line I do love is:
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I do like this one! Very meaningful and a strong feeling connected.
One little thing…possibly just me…but you play with colours here and you started right away with pink and purple, I’d have come up with a little colour in the first lines of … -
DO YOU REMEMBER ME ?
I've been the last summer wind. A‘
While you saw the autumn's stars
I've been the last loud laughter
Before tears rolled down your cheek
I am that whats left behind
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Thanks you two! Specially for pointing out some of the shit stuff my cell did on its own lol. Forgive me but as you know, it has to deal with 3 different language. I’ll change that.
About the last line: I know what you mean but I wanted that … -
It feels more smooth when you read it, don’t it?
I like the „blood-inc“ line!
One little thing:
A wild tapestry, where threads align > skip the „A“ -
Thanks pry and Sid! This one really means a lot to me. You know when you have written many pieces but only a few are always with you? This is one of those pieces!
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Thanks Owen, perfect explanation!
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You can use long lines or broken rhymes or all that, if you want to highlight something you want to say. Those little things are style methods that can „used carefully“ help to underline the message of your song, but first you should practice to bri…
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Thanks mora and matador! I really appreciate it!
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Hey there! While reading I was a bit unsure about two sax soli. After listening I think it’s fine if you call it bridges or connectors, a solo means more to me than it is in the song.
One small thing I would change:
after her touch,-&g… -
Hey, glad I could help!
I guess you missed something here: Searching for words guide me home…
And:
The song grew to heavenly height —> MY song…
It feels more smooth while reading, just don’t change to many images fr… -
Uh…oh… mhhh… I like the way you use your pen to write down good stuff like this. 😅
I like the image and the style I’ve chosen to put your words together. It definitely got style and shows a mighty little poet inside. Keep him alive!!
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