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Something light to listen to! Wow. Intense
I think the looser structure is working really well here. It's a stream of consciousness, gushing forth. It's all coherent, but it feels almost random.
The message comes through clea…
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Thanks Mora! Your songs and videos are amazing! You and Marcus are amazingly creative! But I'm glad you enjoyed this one too 😀
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You have your own style, but if you wanted to try something different, you could think of writing a song like writing a book. What's it about? How does it start? How does it progress? How does it end? Who are the main characters? How should the r…
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I like this one. It's got attitude, and the music complements that by being punchy. Quite memorable too.
I can see this one being popular played in a club or similar.
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I get an "ignorance is not bliss" message from it. I can't link it to any specific "fall", and suspect that's deliberate, but it does make it a bit more abstract.
The sound is really clean and polished. I'm guessing this is tracking closely…
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@jgkojak That's an interesting suggestion. Thanks! I'll consider that. And yes, it really was written for a female v…
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What I'm getting from this one is a long distance relationship that isn't working, but it isn't 100% clear.
There isn't the emotional impact here that you often have. Is the person speaking angry? Over it? Trying to make it work? I can't re…
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This is pretty far from my style, so it's hard to comment on it meaningfully.
The chorus feels pretty catchy, so people should be able to sing along there.
Musically it feels repetitious, which I suspect is more to do with the genre: …
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You are one productive man Elvis! I caught the reference. Good on you for being able to convert it to music! Works too, came out well.
Yeah some days I’m cardigan kindness
Other days I’m pouring gasoline
Ni…
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This is great. This could easily be in the repertoire of any commercial band. I would listen.
Your voice whispers from yesterday
Nice line! I like the picture cliffs and the wood poppies too. Strong visuals and s…
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Yes, I see that, but you're speaking in generalities - He was a rambler, drinker and gambler, yes, we get that, but what did he do? that's telling us what he did and not showing what he did
True!
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Yes, you're absolutely encouraged to share your opinion! That's what we're here for. And I agree that your comments are about the lyric, not AI.
This one isn't done in a storytelling style as you know. It's done in 3 scenes, but I do think…
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I was expecting a blues style from the title. Caught me off guard. Not a problem though, just a surprise
I enjoyed this. Got an upbeat energy to it. Which seems a bit at odds with the lyric though! If I read that right, this is a breakup so…
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Oh that's different. Intensely moody. I love the music. Really interesting instrumentation. Cello's great, but so is the entire mix.
No idea what it's about though.
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@StoneFlowers Ha! Well I'm glad you enjoyed one of the versions! It's the same song either way…
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@MuskieBait44 (and anyone else who cares to!) It's a good exercise to try writing a song from the persp…
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Had to come back for another listen!
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Interesting! Controversial one here!
@bhengen Lack of emotion eh? Ok, I see where you are coming from. I'l…
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Glad to hear you're ok!
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@ElvisNash Mine is!
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@ElvisNash , you might be better off with a private message here. Ben should get a notification then to look at…
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This one feels like it's written specifically about you. It's got the ring of truth to it, but it's also harder for the listener to put themselves into the song and empathise. One for open mics maybe.
Got a kicking beat to it though. Found …
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That is just beautiful! What a song!
Love the chords and melody at 'Love is a hard, hard heart ache".
If love is only for your body to make…
…Then love is a hard, hard heart ache
oof. Great lines.
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20+ inches expected. 70 MPH winds. Total white out.? Wow. Stay safe man. That is serious territory.
I like your lyric. Especially that Bridge.
I'm less keen on the vocal melody for this one. It felt a little less defined than usual to…
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Love it. Love the tongue in cheek nature of it. Nothing to put off our better halves there!
If you wanted to take if further I think a rhyming scheme would really add to it, It's the sort of song that feels to me like it should have one.
I'm a bit the same as you, I think it came off a bit cheesy. I think the lyric has darker shade to it than is coming across in this version. Although didn't Paul McCartney do that all the time? It's ok, but I wouldn't put it on repeat.
I'm …
Well I'm a sucker for finger picking so that got me in straight away.
It's a cool, funky rhythm. Really easy to get into. Got an upbeat, positive vibe to it.
The lyric itself has a relaxed, conversational style and again that fits rea…
Mora, I'm from Australia, specifically Victoria which is cooler and wetter than most of the country. But still, it's summer here and 30C days are common and we've had some over 40C. I've been to Spain and there are some similarities in terms of c…
A bit of a mind opening one. Not to be understood directly, but to start you thinking, was my read.
Music seems a strong fit, feels expansive. and soulful.
I like it.
They keep improving at emulating humans though. They don't get upset....yet!
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