That which should never be

bhengen · February 22

words me; music; suno

more billisms - What is what should that shouldn't be - a legend in my own mind

was going for rough and unpolished :0

[Intro - 80 BPM slow driving beat, soulful guitar solo]

[Verse 1 - Echo Effect | Layered vocals]

What is what should that shouldn't be

Life is like branches on a tree

Leaves bound but free

With the regretful, wind

[Instrumental Bridge - Guitar Solo]

[Verse 2 - Echo Effect | Layered vocals]

That takes me beyond where I never was

And never again will I be

A sight that never sees

Yet, I'm found, there

[Crescendo]

[Outro - Gentle Fade out]

Where what shouldn't, couldn't be

Yet it was and I saw things

Memories of truths brings

That which should never be

MuskieBait44 · February 22

sounds cool. you got the guitar and atmosphere right. vocal fits nice.

if MC Escher wrote lyrics it would be a lot like this.

I think that is what you were going for.

bhengen · February 22

Thanks. yes, it's more of the prog/experimental rock genre with a blues beat :)

RainyDayMan · February 23

A bit of a mind opening one. Not to be understood directly, but to start you thinking, was my read.

Music seems a strong fit, feels expansive. and soulful.

I like it.

bhengen · February 23

Thanks Owen. it's about lamenting one's childhood...

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