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Sid, you have become our in-house AI guru! Thanks for sharing your knowledge!
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That's a nice line: Echoes of her memory, with every step I take,
There's plenty of blues in it, but maybe you wanted a more melancholy sound, this is fairly upbeat.
Good stuff.
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That's a heck of a story!
My favorite line: "for both of us, a new world's dawning"
Nicely done Sid!
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Love a collab! Great to see you guys working together. Keep 'em coming!
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That came out well!
"Sink or swim" could be another title here if you were looking for one.
The outro feels like it should have something following The AI has put a chorus after this again, which works fine, but if it was truly an out…
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I have no formal training in either music, poetry or lyrics - so many large grains of salt - but I'll try to tell you how it feels to me.
Poetry and lyrics are related but not the same. Things that work well in one format don't always <…
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Good job on this. Bit of a tester for the vocals, but not for you!
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A great rendition of a wonderful song.
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Sid, take a deep breath. You are not being personally attacked here, even if it feels that way.
This is a contentious topic. I remind everyone to remain respectful towards others.
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Love the quiet reflective vibe. Very easy to relax into and drift along.
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Very poetic! This line particularly caught my eye:
Succubus, with your alluring sin,
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Very topical! And sounding nothing like AI.
Did you consider repeating "The AI"?
Put a smile on my dial. 😁
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I hear the showtune influence on this one. And I enjoyed that a lot.
Nothing to do here but sit back and enjoy.
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Good song, got a classic feel to it.
"a little bit of heaven and a lot of hell" is a lovely line.
I'd like to hear you really sing out on the chorus and linger on some of those notes, make the chorus the star of the show.
Very e…
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Nice groove, really easy listening.
I like the way you lift up on "fool me".
I can't say I fully understood it, it felt like a relationship song at the start, but the political persuasion verse feels different. None the less I found i…
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I haven't been using AI much lately (not against it, just haven't been writing much!). Can you prompt for a tempo by suggesting a BPM?
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I'll offer some suggestions, but this is obviously such a personal song that what feels right to you is the most important thing.
I think that without the background story it might be hard to make sense of who is who in the lyric. So I wou…
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I like the contrast between the grey stones and rain of Yorkshire and the plains of Texas!
Starts strong with good visuals and right into the meat of it.
I'd be tempted to halve the size of your verses. In V1 I didn't like the second…
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Happy to give it a go. I think some level of coordination might be required. ie do people submit a line, a verse? How would a lyric be edited, lines removed if it's too long? Things like that.
More people will likely generate more and diffe…
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Strong message!
Not sure about "further we'll corrode", that feels a little awkward to me.
But I really liked:
Rewarding all who lie,
the best who cheat and steal.
Ouch!
Having read it, I…
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Another good one.
My fav lines were:
But love don’t have to be a blaze,
Sometimes it’s a slow burn.
In V1, maybe "Now the fire's not as wild" rather than "But"
and "doesn’t..." might b…
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I like the chorus in particular in this one.
Sure sounds like this cowpoke is having a tough time!
I'm not really a CW fan, but it feels like this one is right in the slot for the genre.
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That's a fantastic chorus, and the whole premise is top-notch.
The syllable counts in the verses are a little uneven and you can hear that in the vocal (even allowing for the vagaries of AI). It might flow just a bit smoother if you could r…
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A dark and desperate lyric. I don't think Suno has quite captured the mood of it.
I really like the making/escaping rhyme in the chorus. I'm wondering if there's a way to do that in the second couplet using self-persecution and something el…
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Very sweet lyric. A unique slant on a love song.
Do autistic people refer to themselves by that label? They may well do, I just don't know.
Maybe muttering ▶️ mumbling?
It's got an unusual style and feel to it, and I like it.
Another great lyric. I really like this type of song with some specific down to earth thing representing love.
That's a lovely lyric! And the AI music fits it well too.
I think my favorite lines are:
The fields that were all golden, they just look washed out and worn,
And the roses that you loved, well they don’t bloom no more.…
I wasn't sure if you were looking for feedback on the lyric as it stands or not?
Best of luck in your search for a musician to work with!
Hi prysmatyk and welcome to the forum!
It's generous of you to give up all rights to the lyric. We do have collaborations here on TSF at times, and you are welcome to post your lyrics as such. You don't necessarily have to give up rights to…
That's an intense lyric. Would that more people were capable of setting someone free in this way.
I don't know if it should be "Knowin' you're in my heart" or "Knowin' I'm in your heart", and maybe either works.
If you needed to short…
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