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I got mama's eyes, but daddy's gun
Nice! Like that.
Good song Elvis.
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@Hardtwistmusic Glad you liked it! The lyrics are from me, all the music (melody, instrumentation, …
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@Hardtwistmusic Thank you so much!
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Nice intro! Kick right into it. This is one to turn up to eleven!
Nice to see Spider Maya making a re-appearance.
I like those double panned vocals on "masquerade' at the end.
Ah, I enjoyed that a lot! Good to hear a new one fro…
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I think the chorus is very strong, and that's as it should be.
Feels like the song would work well with or without the twist in the tail. But it carries an emotional punch and makes you reevaluate the earlier verses.
The AI's given it…
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The title is "Let' Boys Be Boys, Girls Be Girls, but the implication is "Make'. I don't like that part.
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That's a strong lyric. Controlled anger comes through loud and clear. Good, clear storyline.
I think the AI has made it a bit too light and melodic for the lyric - needs more growl to it, but not something you have much control over.
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I listened to all three versions. I'll give you my thoughts, but the question should really be turned around: which version best expresses what you were going for? As the songwriter that's the choice you make. Also there is an enjoyment to playin…
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Nice! Strong lyric.
As I was reading this, I was imagining a more bluegrass style, but this blues version works well.
Good stuff.
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This thread is for comments on my song. General comments go in the general discussion area.
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I think anyone listening to this will hear the sincerity and raw honesty of it.
The line that hit me hardest was "But there’s no coming home", and that's true for all of us. There's no going back, right or wrong.
I suspect the most he…
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@StoneFlowers There's still room for all kinds of music. The world would be a poorer place if you stop…
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Thanks Elvis, yes AI is progressing at a rate of knots.
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NIce clear mix, not hearing any EQ issues - but don't rely on my old ears!
I did find the dynamic panning on the bass a bit distracting from the vocal though. It's a nice effect, suitably creepy, but maybe use it at the start and then only …
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Thanks Joseph! I don't know if I'll do more Uke songs or not. Just wait and see how I feel about it.
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Yep, good job! Definite improvement.
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Quite the story! I like the piggy in the middle wording! And the outro works well too.
I feel like the chorus could still be worked on. As a couple of suggestions:
Thanks for stayin' with me → karma's catching up to me
what's ne…
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I did 2 attempts x 2 tracks, and this was the fourth one generated. So I think that's 40 credits? It was using v4.0 of Suno too, but I'm only on the free plan, so I'll run out of those real quick!
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Love the chorus in this version! And of course the harmonica!
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Re which version of V3, I would say that both are in keeping with the song. It sounds like you already have the feeling it should change, so I would trust that. The most important point is to make it sound right to yourself. For me, the current V…
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That came out very well! So that's Folk Metal huh? Turns out I like Folk Metal!
And that ending with the major chord, nice! Tierce de Picardie!
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Time to step back and draw breath everyone. This thread is borderline about to be closed, and that shouldn't be necessary.
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I think this would go down a treat played live: it's topical, and lively and bound to get a reaction!
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That's a creative idea. The edits are noticeable though. If you really want to pull this off you need to play all those choruses together so you can smoothly transition from one to the other.
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That's lovely, real warmth to it. Some wonderful lines, and really relatable. So glad she loved it.
Brilliant job, Barry!
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I like the lyric, not as keen on the music. It's certainly upbeat but feels a little simplistic. But you can only prompt so much.
I think the chorus works particularly well, hammering home that hook and title, very singable.
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That would be scary as hell. Hope the songwriting gave you something positive to do. Can't imagine how that felt.
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