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Is this one AI generated from your lyric Skandha? If so, would you mind making that clear when you post? Thanks
Lovely melodic feel and a superb vocal. I enjoyed that very much.
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Scorching Barry! That came out really well.
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Definitely one for we songwriters to appreciate! You nailed that positive feel.
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The music for this one feels a bit mild for such a biting lyric. Maybe a rap?
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Glad to hear this one again! It's a treat.
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I like the message, but I found the lyric a bit wordy. I think you need to distil it down to some pithy phrases to make it really hit hard as a song.
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Simply beautiful.
They say that when you know death is approaching all the trivia falls away and you focus only on what matters.
It's clear what mattered to your sister.
I hope that all of us can find such clarity and strength i…
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I like the energy in this one - and it fits the whirlwind theme too. I can hear that Hendrix influence there.
Love to hear a driving bass with this too.
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Yes, I'm using phones. Don't know if that introduces any bias, but that's what I'm doing.
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Second making the vocals louder.
But the music and lyric is all good. Enjoyed it.
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Well that one feels like it should be a hit.
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This is good Renee. I can imagine a lot of people really liking this one.
Got a heartfelt feel to it.
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Nah, just copy and paste Elvis, no biggie.
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Thanks Rob, I appreciate your thoughtful response.
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You had the lyrics with the Youtube video, so I've taken the liberty of posting them here, as it really does help.
I'm Alabama God Bless America confident
Raised right in this half full glass small town...
Daddy's a…
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That was very pleasant to listen to!
So is the lyric about someone writing lyrics and seeking music for them? If so that feels very self-referential.
It has a lovely poetic feel to it (and probably more so in the original Italian!)
Rob, I don't want you to leave, and I'm not asking you to, but I can certainly understand you feeling that way. Censorship is fine until it applies to you personally, and then it's an issue and causes conflict. I won't apologise for it. I don't d…
I accept your assertion that it was not intended to promote drug use.
That does not make it acceptable here on TSF, as it is readily interpretable as being so.
The decision to allow or remove it rests with me as moderator, and not wit…
I remember this one. Worth another listen!
Very tender and emotional. You've definitely got the hurt coming through.
I'd like the chorus to be longer. maybe have a line that varies each time before finishing on "when you lose someone"
I think there's room to really wail out th…
I like that. Good song. Don't write in rap at all, but I enjoyed that one.
I like the song. It's a nice theme, and a more unusual subject.
I'm a bit less sure of your B section. It seems to turn there from the forgotten places to the narrator with lines like:
While ‘being’ gets rough and rougher
That's another strong track. I quite liked the single vocal at the start. I'd rather it dropped back to single vocal rather than continuing onwards with the double vocal which, for me, is a little less clear.
But still, a very professional …
I like this one a lot. "South of a memory" is such an evocative phrase. And the story is all there.
It's very melodic, which always appeals to me.
And yes, you sing it very well!
It's a good one Renee. I'd rather you hear you playing and singing than a backing track - then I know I'm hearing it as you heard it in your head rather than what was available on Youtube. I'm interested in the song, and the songwriting more than…
I've never heard the ice like that! Comes from living in Australia I guess. Glad you were able to record it.
I like this. I really like the picking, wish there was more of that! And the lyrics are very evocative.
I liked the re-interpretation of personal demons within the Jabberwocky framework.
My favorite lines:
I take the potion that makes me tall
Making my problems seem very small
The mother following a similar path is the real gut punch in this one.
I'm not sure "slipping down a hole" is strong enough. It looks like it ought to be, but hearing it, it didn't quite have the impact I expected. Maybe it needs some more …
That's fine we can leave it here. Now we know the kind of comments you were looking for!
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