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That turned out well Art. The AI has done well with the chorus, singing out on the "Tornado" lines really gives it some kick!
Good sound!
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"Auntie Joan" is certainly memorable! But it doesn't feel like something this person would say. Maybe more like "not a friend"? That's a pretty small quibble in a strong lyric. It holds together well.
Perhaps "one foot gently lifts" → "my f…
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Reads well Renee!
You might consider converting V4 into a bridge - ie just give it a different melody and music at that point. Lyrically it already feels like a break from the main narrative, so I think that might work quite well and provi…
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Yep, this works really well.
I like "tied up in tangled sheets"
You need Tom Jones to sing this! Wonder if you can get AI to emulate him?
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Feels like it should have a broad appeal. Best of luck with it!
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Good track. Looking forward to hearing how you re-record it.
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Great story. And the AI has done a fine job with the music, it really suits it.
Enjoyed that a lot!
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I like this overall, but I'm wondering if it would hit harder from a 1st person perspective - eg:
Sometimes I say things that shouldn’t be said.
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Oh no! I just got the uke!
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Another strong song from you - haven't heard a bad one yet.
Love that line "My head has gone"
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There's few soldiers that come back the same - and not for the better.
This really captures that well. My favorite lines are:
Here’s a picture of my brother
And that’s all that there is
Lovely to hear…
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I like that. Good lyric! I remember Pat from his days here. Strong message.
Solid instrumentation all round. Lead is the star, but the piano is a really solid foundation and the drums too.
Good work.
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This feels like a very personal song, and you should choose what's there or not if that's the case.
I'll say that "riffraff" in the chorus isn't 100% clear to me. It feels like something personal between the narrator and her mother, and I'm…
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The relief of finding her alive and not caring about the car shines through, that's my favorite part.
Don't forget to leave feedback for others while you are here - 2 comments for each song you post yourself.
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Well done, Ian. Smoother now.
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That's a cool song, and the music came out really well.
I don't know the ins and outs of copyright law, but I'm guessing it's only going to become an issue if there's money on the table!
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We have a policy on this. I don't think anything material has changed recently.
AI song generation is becoming more common, and therefore is appearing more often in posts.
However, you don't need to even listen to these if you'd rathe…
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Beautiful.
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Definitely has a different vibe to some of your others. I think I see that French influence, a sultry, sophisticated tone to it.
I love your opening verse, I think that's very strong.
I like the story in v2. It doesn't feel quite as t…
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"Symptom of a selfish heart." is a lovely phrase and a great way to end the chorus.
It gives me a slightly creepy, controlling vibe, which I'm hoping is deliberate!
Definitely got a mood and atmosphere going!
In terms of postin…
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I particularly like the ex-marine father-in-law, and how he came around. Held my attention.
Not a subject I would ever have thought of writing about, but you've made it work!
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Good song Renee. Really painting a gritty picture here.
And the music seems like a good fit to the lyrics.
Nicely done.
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Another beauty! So of the era, really this could be a recording of that time.
Wonderful.
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Nicely done. Good song!
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Yes, that's a good version!
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I like that you push the boundaries and show wide the possibilities are.
I think the music came out very well indeed on this one. I certainly enjoyed it.
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My favorite phrase here is " land of milk and money" -ouch!
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As was I reading this I was considering what kind of music might suit it and thought something a bit jazzy and sultry, and that's not far from what you've got.
I think you could combine V4 with the chorus, double the length. Feels like it w…
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