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I like this, but I think your key line: "All I wanna be...just a guy and a guitar" needs to be more singable for an average listener. It's a bit downbeat and clipped. Doesn't sound bad, it's just hard to join in.
Nice guitar riffs …
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Well that's a cynical, world weary one! But it's definitely got an attitude.
The copy Rolex / fake Gucci is a nice touch. Really shows them both faking it in a very visual concrete way.
And "lasted, till the rent came due" is a nice a…
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I'm afraid not. Haven't gone down that route.
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You are prolific Guy! And the world is a better place for having you and your songs in it. Keep 'em coming!
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That's really sweet! And nice to hear. Good luck to the both of you!
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Good feel to it. Not overly complicated lyrics, just something to get into.
Could easily imagine hearing this on the radio.
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That's a wild dare! Rather him than me, though I'm sure he'll have stories to tell for the rest of his life.
I liked the song. My favorite lines were:
Can’t get there driving
Can’t get there ta…
Great song! First thing I'd say is that you can hear the quality of the song in both versions. If the songwriting aspect is your focus, either version is going to work to display that.
The Suno version is more polished. If you want polished…
I like the rhythm and vibe of this. Found myself bopping along to it.
My main suggestion would be to try to differentiate the chorus more from the verse musically. Feels like they're using common chords / melody at the start there.
I …
Welcome to the forum Brandon. Nice to have you with us!
Well this is a disturbing song! Sends a shiver down my spine, which hopefully it was meant to!
It's a long song, which is really only an issue if you have commercial aspirations,…
Well this bound to appeal to anyone who likes a down to earth woman - including me!
Nice write Carroll, and Suno's done a good job for you.
No worries Bill! You know what you are after, and I'm confident you'll stand your ground when you feel you should.
That sounds so natural, both the vocal and the guitar. I really couldn't pick that as AI generated. And it came out well!
I like the whole "slice of life" feel of it. The Facebook verse got me!
The part about Bobby isn't 100% clear to…
I think you have a wonderful chorus there. Feels strong to me. And the title plays to it, so that's a plus.
The verses around it vary in structure a lot - different numbers of lines, and different lengths of say line 1 across different vers…
You always show me how far a lyric can be pushed out of "typical" zones and still sound like a song.
But I didn't find listening to this as rewarding as reading the lyric. It's an interesting topic and worth exploring. But…
I think that came out very well. The song itself is very good, so it has a strong foundation to work with.
The guitar and bass felt the strongest to me. They seemed uniformly good.
The vocals were mostly good, and having the 2nd vocal…
If you've got the ti…
Well that's a wail of sadness - full of emotion. Slow ballad works very well for the lyric.
Powerful chorus. You might consider doubling up on the "Not for me" there.
"Not for me" sums up the song nicely, but it's not a title likely t…
Love that opening:
Somebody out there hates me
But they don’t know it yet
Got exactly that quirky feeling that you were talking about. Same with the final line of that …
Wild! That made me chuckle, though I will admit I didn't listen the whole way through.
Love to! As soon as inspiration strikes! And thank you.
And back at ya! How about one from you too!
I'll tell my family it's just for my health!! They can wear ear plugs. 😁
I have used it, though it's not yet my preferred approach. I've tried giving it a lyric and seeing what it can do with it (especially if I don't have any ideas myself) and the results are ok, quite polished, but not better melodically than what I…
Goodness! How bad would I be if I didn't play an instrument and sing!!!
Nice to see you posting something Kayla. I think every one of your songs comes from the heart.
It used to happen oc…
You may be right about length - I'll have to check now, I wasn't aware that was an issue. Not in your thread though!
Blending western logic with eastern music? Well why not!
Not really my cup of tea, but it worked far better than I was expecting!
You retain the ability to surprise!
Good feel to it. One to bop along with and enjoy! Gives me a Paul Simon vibe
I like how you're rhyming Spanish and Panic. 😁
I think you might have dropped the first verse from the lyric post, but no drama.
Spaniards are full of …
Be quite a compliment to have Lady Gaga steal something wouldn't it?
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