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Love the funky vibe! Keys are very nice. Agree about the drums, but an easy fix.
Feels like a good match to the lyric too.
Would you mind including the lyrics here on TSF when posting your songs? Makes it much easier to comment on tho…
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Quite like both versions! Nice to have the option to just ask for a female vocal though :)
Only thing I'd point to is "Blue City". I when I think of something blue it's usually associated with sadness or pain, but that isn't the feel of thi…
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Good song Elvis!
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It's certainly interesting to hear it done. And the music is very engaging. Pretty niche though!!
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That's a good one. Strong message, well written. I like all the cat references like:
Ever since that day ain’t been the same cat
And Ben does a good job singing it too.
Well done. Shame about the competitio…
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Yes, the harmonies are a highlight, and I like the build up too.
Is the eagle meant to be a metaphor or are you admiring literally an eagle?
I like the music, and the way it's written, but I wasn't 100% sure on the message
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Enjoyed my listen!
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No, that is not something that ever entered my imagination! But now it will be lodged in my brain!
Thanks for sharing it! 😀
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Upped the ante hasn't it? Helps when everything is within vocal range and harmonies are easy as!
I think you've got the feel you were looking for!
Good job.
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Surreal! I like how it's up to the listener to decide whether this is a story they are sharing, or actually happening. And whether the talking bear is a story he is telling himself on another level.
The children's choir is an inspired choic…
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Great title. Christmas related, but not a Christmas song.
Came out well 😀
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Loving how these are coming out! I'd happily listen to that anywhere it came up.
Good stuff.
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That is a very cynical, down to earth picture of Christmas, and I love it!
Great rocker. The cat throwing up is my favorite.
Really nice mix in it too, everything tight and clear.
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Creepycore! I like that. :)
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Guy, if you're looking for feedback on these, it would be best to post them individually, and one per day.
But I suspect it's more just getting into the Christmas spirit and sharing some content to enjoy in that spirit. And for that I thank…
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Is this built around some existing tale or concept Bill? If so it's not one I'm familiar with.
Really strong contrasts in it. Sort of heaven and hell I guess.
It's not my genre, but it's powerful, and feels polished.
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I get a rap vibe from this. Based on the rhyming and the short sharp phrasing. And I know that may be completely off base from what you had in mind! How somethings looks written, and how it sounds can be miles apart.
If it's delive…
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Might be interesting to try stopping the instrumentation at "silence" to really emphasize that, then bring it back in.
I particularly like "Black and white merged" referring to the crows and the snow. And it felt like an echo with "Everythi…
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Showing your range!
I'd bump the bass a fraction, but I do like the vocals being up front in what's clearly a lyric driven song.
Good feel to it. 😀
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Interesting the way Suno put the female vocal in there in places when male was requested. Obviously the male vocal is there. Just surprised that it used female vocals at all! (other than the outro) Came out well though. And interesting overall ju…
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Quite a contrast between that soaring angelic voice and the darkness of the lyric!
Tons of ambience and mood in this one. Gives the feel of moody lighting and dark corridors.
And a tight ending.
I think that came out very well.<…
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Please do! Post the lyrics here along with a link to a recording (if you have one) and I'm sure you'll receive some feedback as well as encouragement.
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Wow! Not bad for a quick improv! That came out really well.
Hope you're having fun with Suno! :)
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That's good fun, and there's plenty of songs that go no deeper!
Just a couple of things:
- would you mind posting the lyrics here on TSF along with your link? Makes it easier to comment on those
- Please indicate when the mus…
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Like the lyric, but that mix feels muddy to me (or maybe that's just my ears these days!!). It all sounds a bit mushed together.
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I think using Suno allows you to hear the song done in a professional way, and that allows you to focus on the songwriting. It's your lyric and music, and this is as good a version of it as you are likely to hear. Does it work? Are there things t…
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It does depend on what you want to use it for, but I like how these are coming out.
If the idea is to capture what you had in your mind when writing the song, then I think these are really working for you. And it's nice to hear that polishe…
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Cool! I like how that came out. But more importantly, what do you think of it? Is it capturing what you had in mind for the song?
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This is so cool! Wonderful track!
And it feels really polished to me. I can imagine this being on an album (though maybe from the 70s!).
Enjoyed it immensely :)
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Yeah that's fun. Not an all time classic, but like Tex it put a smile on my face, though it kind of needs that explanation to preface it.
Howdy, Stranger!