Jimmy
Words me; Music Suno
This song is loosely based on a short story my sister wrote back in high school. About a boy that dreamt he was an ant. I put my twist on it. the ending is the same.
https://suno.com/s/vbfSzOkJXqyeVKWT
[Chorus]
Jimmy was an abnormal boy
Played with creepy toys
Had a devious talking bear
Oh, the stories they shared
[Verse 1]
Then Jimmy angered the bear
When Jimmy went to sleep
The bear turned him into an ant
Made Jimmy sob and weep
[Chorus]
Jimmy was an abnormal boy
Played with creepy toys
Had a devious talking bear
Oh, the stories they shared
[Verse 2]
Then Jimmy got hungry
Went to the kitchen to explore
Crawled out from the covers
And onto the bare floor
[Chorus]
Jimmy was an abnormal boy
Played with creepy toys
Had a devious talking bear
Oh, the stories they shared
[Verse 3]
He scavenged on the counters
From night until daybreak
Dining on all the crumbs
And pieces of juicy steak
[Bridge]
From the cupboard his mom
Grabs a heavy coffee cup
Sets it down on the counter
Just as Jimmy looked up
[Chorus]
Jimmy was an abnormal boy
Played with creepy toys
Had a devious talking bear
Oh, the stories they shared
[Outro]
Has anybody seen Jimmy?
His mom ponders
Comments
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Surreal! I like how it's up to the listener to decide whether this is a story they are sharing, or actually happening. And whether the talking bear is a story he is telling himself on another level.
The children's choir is an inspired choice. Perfect fit for the theme!
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Thanks Owen. I really appreciate it. :)
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