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Good feel to it. I hadn't heard this one before, so thanks for sharing it!
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Each of your song+videos is a piece of art Mora!
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Good song! I enjoyed that. From the little I've heard from you so far it feels like you've got a definite style.
The mix felt a little treble heavy and bass light to me - not sure if you want feedback on that sort of thing or not.
Goo…
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I like that rhyme in the chorus on goodbye/try.
Feels ready for the full treatment to me!
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I noticed you said you don't have the ability to add a drum track. It's entirely up to you, but there is free software out there that can enable you to do that kind of thing if you want to. If you search for free DAWs (digital audio workbench) fo…
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This is a hopeful one. That's nice to see. A sense of positivity and resilience.
I think it already reads quite smoothly. Some very minor suggestions
Memory → Memories
People gave → People give
I'll set → I set
sc…
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Aah still alive! I misinterpreted! I jumped too quickly to a conclusion :)
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"The song is ok. Not anything that grips me, like a Simon and Garfunkel or Joni Mitchell song."
in 🅰️In all those days gone by Comment by RainyDayMan October 2024
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Thanks for posting those!
My suggestion would be to write new separate verses for v2 and v3 rather than repeating v1 (though you could possibly do a new v2 then return to repeat v1 the 3rd time round). Our brains love repetition with variat…
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There are no hard rules for how many syllables should be on a line, nor how many lines should be in a verse or chorus. And as in The Bard's Tale Comment by RainyDayMan October 2024
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Lovely warm feeling to this, even though there is sadness, and that feeling is a good match to the sun/sunlight/days theme.
I like how "dog-eared" shows how often he comes back to that memory.
"in the glare, even her silhouette was pr…
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I have trouble helping you here Mora. I love what you do, but your style is so unique that I can't really emulate it.
My only suggestion is to try putting yourself physically into an environment that will stimulate the senses. In this case …
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Hello and welcome to TSF!
Got a real rock vibe going there, it's got a definite style and mood, and attitude!
I'm afraid my ears aren't good enough to hear the lyrics clearly on this track, so if you would like feedback on those I wou…
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Great intro! Love that.
Another strong groove and I like the melody too.
That chord change @ "A song of a long hot summer" works a treat.
This one gives me a Springsteen vibe.
Very nice!
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Love the lyric.
I don't think the melody has that ear-worm factor to really stick in people's minds, other than your title line "falling in love with pretty faces" which is solid
But could be one to try out on peopl…
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That's a wild ride! Lot's of strong imagery in this one. Got a fun vibe to it.
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This is excellent. I'll make some suggestions, but I'm not sure it needs any.
Naivety lost, like the peel of an orange,
bare an' exposed, ripe for the pickin'.
Wow! Those lines blew me away. I think "innoce…
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This came out really well. They're lovely lyrics, and this is a fine rendition.
Very cool jazzy vibe! Lovely to see another collab.
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I did enjoy it! Wonderful picking.
A good friend of mine was besotted with Dylan, so this brought back a lot of memories.
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I like the horse FX at the start, but if it was me I would fade them out a bit earlier. They immediately set a context, but after that their job is done. If you want to bring them back in later, maybe just do it once.
I can really imagine t…
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Really like how "The man and his guitar" and "singer an' the song" play off each other in the chorus.
Some really vivid images in this one.
A worthy tribute.
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It's a good one. Kept me focussed all the way through.
I like the self-deprecating humour of: "And that your voice wakes up the dead", I nearly snorted there.
You might try "If you have dreams" ➡️ " in Thank you Comment by RainyDayMan October 2024
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Wonderful groove! Got me in from the get go. This one gives me a Chris Isaak vibe.
Loved this line: I’ll be sippin my thoughts away
Good song! You've got style.
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Love that bridge! The whole song is great, but I particularly enjoyed that.
Excellent production as always!
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The poetic style really fits well with this subject it's a strong match.
You might consider more contrast in your bridge - longer/shorter lines, different rhyming patterns - but it's ok as is.
The AI did a good job on the music too.
A Mora classic! You've lost nothing in being away for a while. Great to see you making music again!
That's the good stuff! Kudos for being willing to experiment with it.
Classic Tommy Day! Your songs are just so enjoyable.
That was cool!
Not sure you need the second vocal in this one, I found it a little distracting.
I hadn't heard this one before - lovely song, and I enjoyed your version of it.
Howdy, Stranger!