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This one doesn't strike me as a dance track like your others. It has a strong beat, but the emphasis is on the lyric.
I think the instrument mix is a little sparse. Personally I'd rather hear some ambient synth in there to fill it out a lit…
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I think it's very clever. I didn't actually enjoy this one. But that's a matter of taste. I'm a lot less into the experimental / prog rock stuff than you are.
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Certainly works as a song! The lyric (perhaps not the performance) reminds me of Paul Simon. Maybe that's the poetic nature coming through.
Verse 3 is my favorite. Great lines there!
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Very nice Tom! If it was mine, I'd put in 8 bars or so of instrumental after Chorus 1, and maybe shorten the final instrumental if you need to.
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Beautiful lyrics. The verse starting "We were each other's fruit," is my favorite, the whole verse is just lovely.
The music gives me a detached feeling, like I'm seeing something from a distance, time in this case. So that seems fitting to…
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I like how this one pokes its tongue out at the world.
Yeah we all need a sense of humour, and I like how that's positioned as a man's strength.
I ain’t rich but I ain’t bitter
That’s a profit I understand
Nice! Like the double slit reference in there in the context of duality.
Bridge is wild with the nursery rhyme references!
I can imagine an extra verse here doubling back to v1 with "Greens and whites, empty nights" etc to structurall…
I like what Suno did with your guitar lines. Came out really well, and the better for having your guidance and input.
This works really well. Gives me warm fuzzy feelings. Love that chorus!
Like how it develops too, learning how it's …
I think you've got the exact sound you were going for. I found this really easy to listen to.
I like your opening verse, got me in right off the bat.
Felt like it took a bit of a turn at the chorus. I didn't understand the meaning of …
Shook hands with the wrong damn crowd
Paid full price for borrowed time
Those are lovely lines!
I'm reading "Out past the bars" as meaning he is currently in jail.
Not sure it's got quite enough of a …
Love the message!
The song itself is a moment in time lyric. Could be difficult in later years to make sense of the various references, but right now it hits the mark.
"Keep us safe from war" feels a little passive to me. Maybe "Save …
Wow Bill. I feel like I had a pampered childhood now! I got bullied once or twice but nothing worse than a punch in the stomach.
Yeah that refrain really hits hard. The verses are almost too fast for me to keep up with without the written lyrics- but my brain is old now!! Young 'uns might be absolutely fine with it.
Plenty of story there. Harsh, gritty. it's a side o…
This is a really good. Almost a Tom Waits feel to it.
It's personal. but also social commentary told as a folk tale.
Love the slow pace of it, a funeral march.
Really good work, Elvis.
Some people are crazy! Or maybe that's me!!! Who can tell?
Great player! But Django is a legend.
Those kind of concepts boggle the mind. Different sizes of infinities. I mean I can read something that says: imagine a line that goes on forever, now image a 2D surface, it's clearly a larger infinity. But it doesn't really sink in.
And y…
So good! This is brilliant stuff.
Love all those internal rhymes.
Vocal choice is really strong.
And wild dynamics.
Whoever loves least will control how it ends.
Great line! Great hook, and ther…
Nice vibe to it.
Just a thought maybe "It’ll be my heart" to "Be my heart", little less crowded? But if you take it further there'll likely be a chance to smooth that anyway.
Luck’s just fear in costume
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It's a cool vibe Bill. Is there a story that goes with it, or is all about the atmosphere?
Thank you Chris! And may I say kudos for listening to the AI version and framing it the way you did. It's a nuanced reply without invalidating your overall preference for live music.
I like how "do you wanna dance?" came out in that first verse. The quickened pace there works well.
Bit of philosophical life advice. I like how its source is "Someone once told me", lets you make up your own mind whether you want to believ…
You've got the Beach Boys style down pat out of Suno.
I had no idea what a California Stop was. Live and learn. Not suggesting you shouldn't use it, only to expect ignorance from those like me!
Is it called a "double wide" line there?…
You're allowed your opinion on the matter Elvis, but when that starts applying to other people I'm sure you can see how that becomes abrasive. Saying it's a joke doesn't really take the sting out of it. I'd appreciate it if you would take care wh…
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@ChrisPrice Yep! We agree to disagree on this point, and that's totally without rancour. I respect your positio…
Not the AI song that bothers me, but setting up all the fake profile, pictures etc. Clearly intended to fool people. Probably to get money.
But yes, quality is good enough that you can't tell just by a listen.
I wasn't sure how "You can’t out-run dying things" was going to sound just reading it, but it came out fine.
And the spoken pre-chorus is a really nice effect.
Far too true!!
I'm by no means anti-AI, but I am definitely pro-honesty about it! 😀
Says the man using it daily! Speaking as one who was never going to pay the 700 pennies, it feels like the ability to do something that couldn't be done before, to hear my songs at a professional level rather than with my scratchy guitar playing …
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