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Thanks Toney!
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I think you've got this now Renee. You know what you're looking for and how to bring it home.
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Elvis, not sure if you meant it this way, but songs where you write neither the lyric nor the music aren't suitable for posting on TSF. There has to some meaningful contribution by a member.
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Enjoyed that! Music to drift away with.
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Wow! Nailed it, didn't it? Spot on for the era.
Cause, you gave it a good lyric to work with! And presumably a good prompt to go with it.
I know what you mean about the endings, but this is a great one.
Congratulations!
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If you'd like comments on the lyric, it's helpful if you post them here on TSF, make it easy for people to follow along as they listen.
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Both versions are more upbeat than I was expecting just reading the lyric, but they both work.
You might consider adding another chorus ahead of the Bridge. I think the chorus is strong and deserves another round. The song seems short enoug…
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Yes, it is quite inconsistent. I've experienced that directly, and have heard others say the same.
I think the AI music models are still improving. It will be interesting to see where they are say 2 years down the line.
What I'd real…
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Moved to the General Discussion area.
Glad to hear your brother is doing better, and good on you for taking on the role of carer, it can be quite demanding!
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I think this works smoothly as a pop vocal. Very easy listening.
Should it be my husband and kids "are" as well?
It's a nice twist at the end, though I think it would with or without the outro.
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I’m a sad sack
Sad as any sack can be
I think that works very well.
It's probably better to have some upbeat music, as you have it, than something morose, might have brought it down too much.
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That's nice. Got a real feel good factor. Love the description of the kids on bikes and how that morphs into them riding Harleys.
It's a great hook and title, and none the worse for being used before.
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I like the vibe. Reckon there'll be more than a few who'll enjoy this.
You might try a change up in the melody at "My old truck", give it a bit of a lift there.
I'd like to hear an ending rather than a fade out, but that's personal pr…
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Lol. We'll agree to disagree on this one! 😁
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That came out really well. It's spot on for that style. Could easily be off a record of the era.
I haven't used AI for a while, but I think there is an option (at least on some platforms) to ask it to regenerate only within a given timefram…
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Ok, but where is that in the song?
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It's a nice groove, but I was looking for a change by the end. I found it a bit repetitive, and I think greater separation musically of the verse and the chorus would help there.
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I like the story. It definitely has impact.
I found the perspective a little confusing/ambiguous. The verses are in 3rd person narration, then the chorus is in first person. But is it the soldier speaking or the narrator? Is the narrator th…
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Agreed. It comes across as very real and heartfelt.
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Lets keep this particular thread about our different songwriting processes.
We have plenty of other threads to discuss AI!
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"How far i've left to fall" is a cool phrase. I feel like it's used here to mean "how far I've already fallen" rather than what is ahead, but I don't think that matters much. Like I said it's a cool phrase.
The morality involved feels a lit…
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I'm not sure what they meant by saying "not actually Artificial Intelligence."
It clearly isn't done by humans, it's accomplished in mere minutes. It's a fully automated process run in software on an architecture commonly referred to as Ar…
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This is lovely. So sad and bittersweet. That chorus hits hard.
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I can understand the feeling. It's disturbing to see familiar things change, and to have people around you feel like strangers. It sends danger signals to our brains.
In the larger picture, your ancestors are just one wave of migration that…
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Some lovely lines in there:
Got lost on a dead end street
I fell out of a fallen tree
Just around the corner baby
Down a street named desir…
Strong lyric, and Suno has done a great job with it. It nailed the ending too, which it sometimes has trouble with.
Good sound!
Nice! Mandy sounds very smooth!
Tic Toc, my time is running out,
find someone else to talk about.
Those are my favorite lines, I like how you're using tic toc there.
Nice to turn the spotlight on this aspect of the internet. I hope someon…
I think the chorus works very well in this one.
I'm in two minds about the Jonathan Long reference. On the one hand it's a very specific detail that makes the song feel grounded in reality. On the other, most people aren't going to know wh…
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