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My apologies on that one.
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If you can't find the lyrics then don't post it. We aren't here to review AI music.
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Please post the lyric here on TSF. With AI generated music, it's the lyric we can add most value to.
Also, mark in your post that the music is AI generated. Then those who don't wish to listen to that, won't have to.
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Lyrics: Elvish Nash, Music: Suno AI
[Verse]
Living in a castle made of gin and tonic lies
Counting all your gold but still you're never satisfied
You think your banknotes got the answers you seek
But silence is the g…
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"Genetic dice" feels a bit more natural than "genetic slice". Don't know if there's a way to rearrange to make that fit.
Good fit of musical style to the lyric.
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"Bars Guitars And Cadillac Cars" is a wonderful title! Classic feel to it.
The whole song just works. Good write Elvis.
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We do indeed have a lot of freedom to express ourselves in song.
Nice write!
As a suggestion, on your second bridge you could vary it slightly:
No donkeys and elephant’s tellin’ me what's right
(doesn't rhyme with 'me' any…
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Just one new song per day please Elvis, as per site rules.
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Nice work.
The AI hasn't put much emphasis on 'just a shadow of myself". You could try adding another line on the chorus "Yeah a shadow of myself" or something like that, see how it sounds.
Like the style you chose for it.
<…I like the lyric, though I suspect it has more meaning personally to you than to a general audience.
I found the melody a bit less distinct and memorable than most of your songs - it didn't stick with me afterwards, though it sounded fine a…
I like the forwards lyrics!
The backwards lines have that "gotcha" factor, but after that I think they lose their value rapidly. Sound alright with the AI melody though.
For an extra challenge, have a different set of lyrics that you…
V3 is my favorite from a songwriting perspective.
I like the chord change for the chorus too.
You might consider:
Get so confused → Get me so confused
And I lose all dignity → And I lose all my dignity
Sad, but true.
This appears to be a duplicate so I'll close this one.
Hard to do a cover that's going to appeal more than the original!
Yep, that works. Nicely …
Glad you're still here Buddy!
Very moody and evocative. One to make the hairs stand up on the back of your neck.
The music link worked for me by the way.
The last 2 lines felt just a touch crowded, but you could certainly get away with them.
This works very well. Love that harmonica and the way you sing out on "having more"!
I can imagine this going down really well live.
Appreciate if if you could post the lyrics for your songs here on TSF.
You can write a song about anything!
Do you find covers bring you much traffic to your channel Elvis?
Would you mind posting the lyric @carroll ?
Also, don't forget to leave comments for others: two comments for…
Strong playing as always.
The lyric is longer in this one, and I like that. Two verses and two choruses. I think you could even put another chorus after the lead break if you wanted to.
This one feels more complete to me.
I like those ringing bell like tones in the intro. Like those to return in the break or at the end.
And the music is solid the whole way through.
The vocals are unclear in this one, I have a lot of trouble with my old ears making out …
I like this one. It has a simple sweetness to it that just works.
There's plenty of songs where the title doesn't appear in the lyric.
If you use the title you have above, with "The Hummingbird Song" in brackets then everyone will kn…
Doesn't convey much to me, I'm afraid.
Got a lovely feel over all.
In your chorus, I feel like the last two lines shift the focus away from her/them to an almost "look what I've got" vibe, which doesn't feel quite right to me.
Borrowing from some of your other lines, I'd t…
I don't think the train should reach its destination. It should approach, and maybe our protagonist should disembark but the final steps should be ambiguous (as death is).
Also, I didn't feel a clear message in the chorus. I don't understan…
That feels very real. Beautifully written.
I’m a hurricane
I make Superman’s head spin
Nice! Good line.
I don't know if will fit, but I'd like to hear you sing out on hurri-caaane and give it some emphasis. You'd probably have to change the way you'…
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