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This is really nice. The music is a wonderful choice for the lyric. They seem to match beautifully.
And a positive finish, that's nice. Certainly conveys that it's all in our head, and a matter of perspective and choice.
Good write!
Good message! These were my favorite lines:
There's a mirror in the corner it don’t tell no lies
Shows the cracks in my armor and the tears in my eyes
Not entirely convinced about the straight repeat at the…
That's wonderful Renee! A little external validation never hurt anyone, and being a finalist in GASC is certainly that!
Congratulations! And good luck on the production side of things with Toney. Hope it all works out.
Thanks Renee! The AABB scheme is one I use less frequently, but it did seem to pay off in this case. Appreciate you taking the time to look at the structure as well as taking a listen. I'm flattered that it caught Toney's attention enough to ment…
Hey Renee! Lovely to see you back :)
Love the growl in the chorus! And good choice using B&W for the video too (up till morning).
Really enjoying the picking in this one. Is that you Elvis or a session muso? Wasn't expecting the sax!
Enjoyed that.
Classic myth! And right in your sweet spot, stylistically.
Nice write! Full of detail and imagery. I can imagine the scene
Lovely blues number! Love the harmonica and nice guitar work too!
Like how you are switching between Invisible Man and Invisible Guy.
Can feel this way sometimes!
Good stuff!
I don't really have a favorite solo, in the sense you mean. So I'm going to throw you a curveball and point you at Tommy Emmanuel's performance of Classical Gas. …
For me the song really hits it straps in the chorus, and at Verse 3. I think the Embassy verses are too far removed from most people's everyday experience to resonate. I would ditch those and start with what is currently V3. The accent is a usefu…
You don't have to worry about the lyrics, but the music side may still need investigating. But you may know more about it than I do!
I'm not familiar with the movie, but that hardly matters, the images you've painted are so vivid!
A heavy rock opera vibe to this one. Suno has done very well with the transitions between the various parts.
And there's progression and…
I love how dramatic the music is for this one. It's a really tight fit with the lyric.
Great storytelling. Really like the chorus, especially that final line.
I'd love to see the outro tie the fate of the two vessels together somehow.…
Thanks Tom!
Great song Tammy! Not surprised the radio station took it up! And how lovely that your daughter recognized how important it was to you and made you that lovely surprise gift. I would feel delighted if that were me.
Great rhyming in this one…
@TammyB That's a wonderful song. Happy to remind you of that one. But I have to say I don't see the similarity myse…
@ElvisNash Here is a link: https://chatgpt.com/
@StoneFlowers Yes, came up with the title and built the story out around that. Fortunately not based on…
Thank you Tammy, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm afraid I can't say which rock song it could be reminding you of. But this is literally a 3 chord song, very basic melodically, and it's likely to share attributes with many others because of tha…
Kayla, I've taken the liberty of suggesting some changes here. I hope that doesn't upset you. Use it or lose it as you see fit. Not suggesting this is the "right" way to do it, just how I would modify it to make things clearer for the li…
Thanks Sid! Yes, nice to be posting something. Inspiration has been elusive of late!
Thanks Bill. I used ChatGPT for inspiration, and evocative phrases, but cohesion, flow, sequence were things I brought to the table. And my own phrases! So some similarities with your experience.
Yeah, that's a lot coming at once. I hope turning it into song helped you to cope with it, at least a little.
I like the storm metaphor. I think that works well. There's a lot more structure in this one, and I like to see that. I think it helps. I can imagine this being set to music much more easily.
I didn't really understand the chorus. The "song…
You make me feel the love.
And yes, Suno did a great job on bringing out the soul of it musically.
Lovely, Tammy, great job on this.
Wow! That's like a theatrical performance or an opera. It feels huge.
Wildly emotional and almost grotesque imagery.
Intensely creative. That's a special one.
Definitely has a 50s/60s European feel. I can imagine Charles Aznavour singing this.
Things are never the same when we return.
That's surreal. Light hearted melody, vivid color images drifting into horror. And a play on words with "take my eye".
I can't help but imagine you sitting with a wry grin wondering what people will make of these songs!
You can still write the songs, Elvis! Darn good ones. The professional recordings may not give you the return though now.
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