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Yep, that's a good fun one!
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I like this version RC. The images feel a little clearer, and the whole a bit tighter.
Good job on revising it. No reason to expect it to be perfect first go.
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That's a powerful lyric, Renee! You've been able to put a lot of emotion into it.
Tells the story really clearly and how important it is to you. I'm so sorry you didn't get to reconnect with her before she died.
As a suggestion you mi…
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Good job Renee! Feels like an improvement to me. I like the new chorus, and the pre-choruses too. This line really jumped out at me:
I’m takin’ off, takin’ off the noose
I like how "tak'in off" can mean leaving, …
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That's funny. I love the idea of the cowhand being allergic to cows!
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Here's one we can all get behind! Who doesn't feel this way?
Great collaboration, and a heck of a lotta fun! 😀
As a matter of interest, why 'sum-guns' rather than 'son-guns'? (It's not a problem, gives it character).
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That's wonderful John! Great song! You've got the style down perfectly.
Give it to a professional studio and it will sound a million dollars.
Great piano playing! I am really grooving along with this at the moment.
Fantastic!
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Hangs together well.
Up until the Bridge, it felt like the narrator was going to achieve success thru something other than money, as it felt to me like that was being disapproved of. So a bit of a twist there at the end.
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Tempo feels good to me. Might be a bit rushed if you speed it up.
I like the vibe and feel of it. Bill mentioned an anthem and it does have that powerful, uplifting feel.
Good stuff.
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I don't really connect with this one. I kept waiting for it to build up and power out - you know like a wildfire inferno. But it stayed low key and honestly a bit tame. It's fine, but it didn't set me on fire.
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I like the shape of this, good structure.
Really strong opening lines:
A tear falls from her eye
She's all damaged and broken inside
Not sure about this one though: "I was taught to never lie". As a l…
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Wonderfully moody piece. Amazing what Suno can do nowadays when prompted properly. I will say it is very difficult to understand the words in this one though. Without the lyric, I would have been lost.
It seems like one to drift away on.
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Just wow Bill. What a song.
And what a strong woman your sister must have been.
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Nice! Like all the car references. My fav line:
The rearview shows a life I can't take back
Strong visuals. Got a cool factor to it.
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Happy to be proven wrong! 😁
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I like the warmth in that chorus very much. There's a sense of intimacy and love there.
I don't really understand the context from the verses. "but every pause, every note you play," suggests music, but are they playing an instrument? But t…
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I love your intro! It sets up a dynamic tension right from the get go. No mucking about we are into the heart of it!
I like "The travesty of love" that's such an evocative line, but I think you need to explain/justify it next in the chorus.…
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It kind of feels like too big a gap between cowboys and today for this to work, for me. And this is a lyric driven song.
"self-drivin' cars, an' drones" puts it squarely up to date, but cowboys on horses have been gone a hundred years by an…
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Love the accordion opening.
Good storyline, and I think the ending is brilliant, and kind of redeems the plotline overall.
Not sure " time an' bodies, openly" flows quite smoothly.
I think the chorus needs a bit more punch. Mayb…
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That must have been a wild ride! Hard way to spend a 3 day break, but makes for a good story!
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I like your voice on this. It feels like a good match. And it's lovely to hear it set to music.
Good job, both of you!
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That's a lovely song. Very poignant. That word feels overused, but it seems the right one here.
Sadness and loss. We can all relate in some way. There's an ache in the lyric, and the music matches it.
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Hi Toney! Always glad when a song hits the mark. Appreciate your comment, and even more you mentioning it to Renee. That tells me you thought enough of it to mention to someone else. Thank you.
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I like this, but I feel like you might swap A and A+ around. If you start with storms and waves, then go peaceful, the desire for harmony and then back to thunder and lightning it feels like a better progression to me.
Love all the visuals!…
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Very nice! I can image a couple of extra repeats on "Holla if you want the ole school back." ahead of the solo and maybe later on as well.
Lovely lyric. Ole school ain't coming back, but this should appeal to a large number of people!
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There's nothing to improve here Renee, it's already wonderful.
You can hear the sincerity in every word. It's chock full of love and emotion.
I like little things like how you are rhyming tracks and back
This isn't my favorite of yours.
It's got a strong rhythm but I feel like it needs something to give it a kick along. The chords feel a little bland.
You've got quite a dramatic lyric, but against the disco backing it loses power.
…I think the best lines are:
O.K. with all he's doin', until,
the day, they come for you.
That punches pretty hard and is easily understood.
I'm not convinced "habeas corpus" works in a song. Not sure …
Then I reckon you got there!
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