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Much cleaner Tom, good job on that!
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The Immigration situation in America is a tragedy, and that's coming across loud and clear.
Not sure that mixing in the pollution aspect is helping that message. For me that risks losing focus, and may put some people off who would otherwis…
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Very appropriate to today! The electronic version is definitely a good fit to the lyric, though I probably enjoyed the rock version more!
Good lyric!
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Good fit! I enjoyed that.
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I love Steam Powered Giraffe! Don't think they are steam bots though!! Honey-Bee is a great song!
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Very much a soundscape, as you noted in your introduction.
As always the images and video are a treat!
Unusual and engaging. I enjoyed my watch and listen 😁
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Lovely story, well told.
Good strong chorus.
I can imagine some people putting this one on repeat.
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That's a hard hitting one! Reads well though. And very topical.
What style of music were you thinking of for it? Feels like it's going to have some pace and energy to it.
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That's a fun one! No one's going to forget the title - and that's a good thing!
I like the energy of it. Gets your head bobbing.
Good stuff.
PS, would you mind posting the lyrics along with the link for the next one? Makes it mu…
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Definitely has a gritty, cool factor going. It put me in mind of Counting Crows.
Like how you're using Antibody & Anybody. It's really catchy.
Feels like Suno struggled a little on the timing in the chorus, not quite as smooth the…
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Nice! I like it.
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Sid, you can use or dismiss any suggestion of mine in whatever way helps you best!
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Lovely story Sid! Develops nicely. Pulls on the heartstrings there with the braces and stagefright. Good to see it come to fruition at the end.
I think the chorus needs a bit more punch in that 3rd line. Maybe "My star's gonna light up the …
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Solid lyric. I suspect there's far too many people living just like this.
Does the chorus follow the first pre-chorus? It isn't shown, but you might be missing an opportunity to hammer home your hook if you don't.
I wonder about havin…
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I can post them for you:
The Insomnia Song
I gotta get movin
I gotta get a job
Everybody I know
Thinks I'm a lazy slob...
And then some
Look at my belly
What happened to my hair ?
My back…
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An interesting piece! Let's hope that's the way of it. Doesn't sound too bad a way to go out!
The chorus is the heart of it, as it should be. Ties everything together.
I like the "it’s nowhere near home" line. It avoids having to esta…
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Reggae? Wasn't expecting that! But what a great result! Good on you for trying something different.
I think this works really well. I particularly like how you sing ri-i-ise but honestly it's all good. It just works
Good stuff, Renee!…
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I do like the new version better- feels smoother to me. But the ultimate judge is of course yourself!
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Very true! The world could desperately use some more love at the moment.
Presence, care, courage and sacrifice
The only kind of love that will suffice
Lovely lines.
I don't know if you can manage it, …
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Love the intro! Nice relaxed vibe overall. Gives me a California vibe.
You're right about winter here! Frost this morning. Brrr.
Would you mind including the lyric with your posts? Makes it much easier to follow along!
Was it di…
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Slim to nada
I would’ve won
But dreamin’ big
It sure was fun
Yep! Ticket to dream is what you get!
Sometimes it's forced, but you've gotta keep smiling.
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@mandosummers If you post AI generated music, please note it as such in your post. You can use a tag or…
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This is a pretty one.
Some lovely lines there like:
Two hearts and promises broken
Lives that we let slip away
I hope you won't mind me saying, but this seems such an english love song: rest…
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I think the first version has a more commercial feel, but the second is my favorite. I feel a lot more emotion coming thru in that one, and it also has a more unique feel. But if I was pitching trying to make a dollar, I'd go with #1.
And B…
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Thread re-opened for comments.
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Big changes coming with robots and AI and you're definitely reflecting that here. You're not alone in your fears for humanity. It does feel like playing with fire, creating something so powerful where we can't be sure of the outcome. Even if they…
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Interesting that it is different! It may reflect the prevalence of data in some way - rape by males being far more common.
I'm glad it refuses in both instances rather than just one!
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Lovely lyric! Seems well suited to this soul style.
I really liked:
You’re good at correcting others
But the red pen seems to
Run out of ink
When it comes to you
"Enough is too much" would…
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Please include the lyrics when posting a new song.
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This one feels like a bitter smile and a shake of the head.
I like that you've started with the narrator talking about themselves. It makes it inclusive, it's about us, not a criticism of them. And that leads nicely into t…
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