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Interesting idea! They certainly slide from one to another well enough. The same key makes that work of course, but the strumming pattern likely helps too.
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Nailed the sound. Can totally imagine this being played at a disco.
It's a song I would probably recognize immediately when it came on, without remembering more than half the words, excepting "I'm still looking for love".
Very polishe…
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That's a good one. Love that chorus:
Ya think twice...before you think one night
Easy to sing a long with, and memorable.
Good story, and strong visuals. I like how the music drifts into mexican themes at t…
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That's a wild one! But funny.
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I really like those "uh huh"s at the start! Really in sync with the backing track!
Full on lyric! No holds barred on this one! A strong political message coming through loud and clear!
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Just saw a meme that said "If there's any justice, Big Beautiful Bill will be the name of Trump's cellmate". Too good not to share!
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You're a multi-talented musician then!
All my comments are only ever: have you thought about ...X And clearly in terms of the Elec Guitar you already have!
And I agree that you can rarely get things 100%, especially not versus the so…
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It's fine to use AI on this forum, please label it when you do so.
It's fine not to use AI on the forum. Or to choose not to listen to AI generated songs.
People have different opinions on AI. And it tends to be like religion:- peopl…
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Good choice of backing music. Gives it an energetic, almost frantic feel that seems to fit the lyric well.
"One world or none" is a wonderful title, and theme.
Chorus has that real sing-a-long factor, an anthem.
It's quite a lon…
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Lovely! All the strengths I saw in your previous song! Are you playing piano on this one?
I might have brought the drums in a touch earlier at "With the stillness around", but that's personal choice. When they do come in, they are exactly t…
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I was drinking a coffee listening to this. Bad idea! I nearly choked when I got to:
they're gonna crap, all over ya persian.
and this one:
Rare as rockin' horse droppin's,
Nice t…
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Yes, that's about my sweet spot as well. I enjoy writing music, but no one wants to hear me perform it - not even me! An AI cover of my song that keeps the melody and mood, but just does it better is what I'm after.
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Like any technology, there are upsides and downsides. It's definitely empowering, both for people who couldn't perform and record before, and for those who want to extend their abilities and try new things. And it runs the risk of flooding the wo…
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I love the expression in your playing, and some great chord progressions there. You have talent!
And a wonderful voice as others have mentioned.
The song feels like a standard. One to admire more than a sing a long - and no criticism …
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Just confirming the Soundclick file is still playing for me. Doesn't help you though @arnabs !
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Nice! Good fun song. Like the driving beat you chose.
Feel like this is going to stick in my head. You can't help but get a visual when the theme is "she looked like Jimi Hendrix"!
Only thing I'd point to is "Nearly gave me a heart at…
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If you feel it's right, then that's what should be there! Any comment from me is simply: have you thought about... And now you have!
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How's winter? Cold wet and rainy! Suits my name! Got a few days of heavy rain at the moment and the fire going most days as well as nights. But better than a drought!
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Got a slice of life feel to it. The chorus, with "when blue turns to gray", is the integrating element, but I'm not sure it quite comes off, because that is so tangential to the rest of the lyric.
I do agree with you that the Bridge hits th…
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That's a good one Carroll! Real psychological thriller, and the music fits like a glove.
I like these lines:
I often feel claustrophobic
When I’m alone with my mind.
and I'm not suggesting you change …
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The music for this one is almost hypnotic, it really pulled me in, and I sort of floated along with it.
I liked the image of time stopping and the universe spreading out all around you.
And your videos are always a treat to watch!
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I love that chorus structure:
Just KIS something...
...something and remember this
with the rhyme at the start and end. I don't remember seeing that before, and i…
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Afraid I couldn't get to the audio, but I love the lyric!
To me this is still very poetic, and beautifully so! Really vivid and visual. I love lines like:
the moon is restless in its own vacant lot
there's just nowhere…
That works really well as a doo wop! Did you write the lyric with that in mind, or just apply the styling afterwards? Either way it's a success!
I like the kind of detail you have in the lyric that paints a really clear picture, and tells m…
Ooh I am feeling tha…
Some very vivid phrases in there, quite poetic as has been noted.
I didn't get a clear message from it, but there are plenty of opaque songs out there that people have pondered over for years. Perhaps this one is of that kind.
That is lovely! A wonderful reinterpretation of Mr Ehrmann's poem, which I wasn't familiar with.
The chorus is key, and it's strong, and memorable.
The other really important part to me is V3. It's the reward or justification for goin…
It made me think of it as a one night stand kind of relationship that you keep coming back to. Before reading your explanation of course! Like the music too. Good track!
Oh wow Bill. How do you even attempt such a thing? It's horrific, and that's exactly how it should be.
I'm not sure this one is quite coming off. I like the message and the theme, but I feel like it needs some angle on the situation to give it a fresh feel. Which is so easily said and so hard to do! Not sure I could. For me the pace was a little s…
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