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@Hardtwistmusic It is a blessing! We've got an open mic coming up next Friday, so I'll get to do 3 …
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Easy listening, almost folk vibe. Probably not a commercial song, but I can imagine this going down a treat at a singer/songwriter night!
More of a Suno thing, but there's a long gap between verses 3 and 4 that doesn't feel like it needs to…
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Feels like a dream, which you mention in V1. Strong imagery, sort of drifting along. An experience more than a message.
And your stunning visuals in the video reinforce that, at least to me!
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I think a lot of people will empathize with this. Hitting a nerve.
Like the grungy guitar driven accompaniment. Prefer that to where you drop back to just vocals and percussion, though that certainly emphasizes the lyric. And you bring that…
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That's a bit special. And Suno's done a lovely job with it.
"Turned seed into corn and his three sons into men" what a lovely line!
I like how the 3rd verse switches to 1st person. It just invites you to do the same and put yourself i…
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Three body problem - very clever! I got a Bowie vibe off of it too, and nothing wrong with that!
And the third unwanted body ejected leaving them harmonious ever after
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Very smooth. Good fit to the music
The Intro was a touch long for me, don't know how much control you have there.
Like the ball reference in " like a screw ball in high-flight" - nice to keep it in context.
Good story, made bett…
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I did not know that!
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You can help by demonstrating the correct behaviours: critiquing songs, not other members, avoiding personal comments etc.
A little patience and tolerance here will go a long way.
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"And accept your voice... It's the only one you have."
Words of wisdom there! I'll think on that one for myself!
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C'mon guys. Focus on the songs, not on each other. The whole purpose of the site is for songwriters to help each other. You don't want to help with this song? That's cool, help someone else! Use your time and energy productively.
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Well that's a heartbreaker! I like how you're using Alice in Wonderful here. Strong lyric. And sadly, true for some people.
Not sure what level of control you can get over dynamics using AI, but I feel like this could benefit from a slow bu…
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Very true!
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Wow! Love the bass intro! How cool is that? And the whole groove of the song is really a strength.
Like the unapproachable / uncoachable rhyme. It really sets a lighter tone for the song.
I also like the overall rhyming scheme, with r…
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Right in your sweet spot, style-wise! That raw edged blues that you do so well.
In terms of the lyric, "Solitary star" seems to play an important role. It doesn't across as any old star, but a specific one. But there's no explanation as to …
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Classic satire! Works because his hair is so well known, and the orange so obviously artificial.
It's quite short, but that's not necessarily a problem. You probably don't want it to hang around (like his hair!) once the main message has be…
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Oh mate! That sounds like such a tough time. I'm glad to hear that music is back in your life, whether you're here or elsewhere, that can only help.
AI can be a godsend for a lyricist. AI generated music is welcome here. The only exception …
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I'll leave the lyrics here for anyone who's interested
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Where's a drunken superhero when you need one?
it be so easy to talk to you if he was around
#1 very tight. Like the dynamics and build throughout. Like the alternating vocals in the chorus. This is my preference.
#2. I thought the melody was stronger in #1. Still good, but not as good.
#3 My second favorite. Driving energy w…
This is a solid track. But after hearing your "Genius in Jean" track, I can't help but wonder how it would sound if you did it yourself!
This song feels all about the sound and the rhymes to me. Nothing wrong with that, not a criticism, it …
Leaves me wondering why is he leaving her? And maybe that's a good thing. keep me thinking about the song.
I like the conversational, down to earth style of it. Seems to fit the characters involved.
First verse is a great example of t…
A faster rhythm to this one, and I enjoyed that. And your slide guitar is always enjoyable to hear.
I didn't follow the meaning of the lyric in this one I'm afraid.
Mr Bloodworth! What an absolute pleasure to see you posting something again! Very sorry to hear about your mom, what a lovely lady she was.
This is beautiful. I think it's clear. Heart transplant from Casey to Hope.
The initial use of…
Not just like it - love it! I've been returning to listen to it multiple times.
That verse may be one of the silliest things I've written and that may be the silliest rhyme. I'm strangely proud of it LOL.
As you should be!
Yes, good fun.
My favorite part was the Tumbleweed verse. Who can resist "The tumbleweed’s humble needs"?
That is a wild ride, musically and lyrically.
There is a story there that you can follow though, so that makes it more accessible.
Certainly agree it's remarkable that you can get that music out of Suno. Not necessarily my thing, but …
Yes, there's definitely times when it's significantly easier to play in one key vs another. That's why sometimes it can be helpful to drop it down in the DAW post recording, but that only works if the tracks are separated. Guitar usually sounds a…
Good track! Tight lyric and music.
The ending is quite abrupt, and you may want that to emphasize that last line of lyric, but I was hoping for maybe a bit of guitar there and a loop around around on the final chorus - bit like Gavin.
Ah! Thank you! The best dress was none at all.
Howdy, Stranger!