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Well, not hard core country! Neither the lyric nor the AI music come across that way to me.
But it's very easy to listen to.
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Not sure I'm qualified to comment on heavy metal! I just don't listen to enough of it.
But it has an epic feel to it, and that seems a good fit.
The music is quite melodic too, not just screech and lead guitar.
Well, I like it.<…
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Nice! I really like those first two lines of the chorus:
I’ll walk again
I’m gonna run
How that really changes the perspective. Not just survive but thrive.
Bridge is strong too.
Love the positi…
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Just listened to the Stirling Castle version, and I have to say I prefer that one. Not just the traditional feel, but the faster tempo too.
But I do like the accompaniment here!
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Certainly feels like it could be a traditional song! A true "chorus" of people for the chorus is great.
Be nice to hear it with violin or accordion accompaniment. The acapella works, but the verses feel a little thin.
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Now there's a strong visual!!
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Need to check your links, Elvis. The ones with "upload" in the text won't work. They need to look like this one:
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I like your songs Guy! You've just got your own style and voice. It ain't going to win you grammy's but I love it.
The 3/4 timing on this one got me in right away. It's almost like a lullaby. Soothing.
Good stuff.
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Could be an opportunity to try for songs you love now, rather than trying to hit the market. Try to find the joy in it again.
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Strong imagery. It's leaning into common tropes and cliches, but I think it's meant to. You're evoking all those scenes and memories of summer from childhood onwards. Things that everyone recognizes.
The chorus feels like it should have a g…
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Dreams are weird and wonderful! I seldom remember mine unfortunately. But you've captured that strange almost alien feel.
"in the cinema of white sheets" goodness why isn't that in the song Mora? It's a wonderful phrase! It would make a gre…
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Wonderful! I really drifted away on that. Really relaxing, spacious and calming (as you said!).
Not sure I understood the "Gravity" reference. It felt more like outer space where there is a lack of gravity.
Could also potentially be p…
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Well you're doing better than most of us then! Congratulations on the cut - even if it was a long time back.
Not actually my favorite of yours, but obviously someone liked it! That's very cool.
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Some nice strong visuals there. The hot, dry dust of Arizona, and the flow of beer at the bar.
For the last line of your chorus, it might sound good if you could start it with "I wonder" to player off "under" from the prev line.
So ma…
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As a Python fan, I can only applaud! Nice to hear this set to music. 😁
Well technically I would call this a derivative work rather than a cover - unless someone had already written the music and you are literally doing a cover vers…
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Lovely sound! Strong message, and the music gives it a lot of depth.
Really enjoyed that.
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Well it doesn't do it for me, but I'm the odd one out! I don't feel like it's saying much.
Can I ask you to indicate in the post when the music is AI generated please? Some members prefer not to listen to those, and it's the compromise we'v…
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Love the honky tonk! And the message.
I'm enjoying some of these older ones Elvis. 😁
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Lovely! Lot's of emotion there. Not just the breakup, but the fear of being alone and growing old alone..
I like the swell of strings at the start. Then the sparse instrumentation, piano and guitar. Gives it a very intimate atmosphere. And …
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Well no harm dusting off the ones you have in the meantime! We certainly haven't seen them :)
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Great story! Love it that she was the judge's daughter. And also that she is referenced by her car! Seems very fitting.
Good stuff.
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Classic country sound! Very nicely put together.
I think the chorus is particularly good and it has my favorite line: Why you could fill your beer bottles with my tears
Good stuff, Elvis!
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Come on Carroll! how about posting the lyric and a link that works?
https://suno.com/song/d40c7b50-cd6e-4847-9843-58d8ab4c2f91
Nice! Definitely got a vibe. Not melancholy, maybe nostalgic. A love song to California.
Good structure, nice easy rhymes - it should flow quite well in your music.
Love to hear it if you ever have that chance.
Some of the phrasing sounds just like your voice on this one! Definitely has an Elvis Nash feel to it.
It's very evocative and moody. I don't really follow the lyric though. Lines like "Like 7 angels thrown to the sun" are vivid, but they d…
I hear hope in the music. It feels like the start of something positive, so that's a great match to your story and lyric.
I'm so sorry to hear of your health issues, and I admire your strength!
You've managed to turn something dark in…
You are correct! Owe…
Well that was very enjoyable!
Brilliant!
It's a good one. nice take on a relationship breakup.
"Every dead person I know says the same thing" strong line. Never heard it used that way before either but it's immediately clear.
Some nice variation in line lengths etc to mix it…
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