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Good song!
My favorite lines:
Don't know what came over me.
A fool in love can hardly see
followed by the one word I think you should change: "victimized", I think that's too strong, and borders on se…
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Both sound good to me, but I'm leaning towards the pop version as well.
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Well I can't argue with this one!
Lovely guitar work! And a solid track all round.
Really enjoyed that. :)
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I particularly like that opening verse. Got a really strong flow to it.
As a suggestion, I think "loose parts" is a little weaker than the rest, maybe you could try:
That seals the cut, the bruised
Parts
Sounds really good Elvis. I really like the rhyming in it. Good vibe to it.
Not sure what it's about, but I can enjoy listening to it regardless!
"I’d rather be alone and by myself
Than to be alone, while being with someone else"
Yeah, that hits hard. Wonderful lines.
And a great melody and sound to go with it.
Good st…
This one is beyond me in terms of meaning I'm afraid, but I like how it came out in Suno.
It certainly has a mood and vibe though.
Yep, that version of V3 will work just fine.
I think the perspective switch is more of a songwriting issue than an English issue, maybe that's why your daughter didn't pick up on it.
Lyric for those who like to read and listen:
[Verse]
The clock spins fast but the days move slow
A fire burns where the shadows grow
I touched the edge and it cut me deep
But I can't stop
I can't sleep
Very interesting! I think the marriage of lyric and music is very strong on this one.
Got a new age feel, and I don't mean anything negative by that. Just the topic as a whole. Could be an audience?
Not a narrative, a collection of ab…
Overall I think this is a good piece. Lots of emotion and that's the main thing. The chorus seems very solid, I particularly like that.
There's a few things I'll point to, but I don't think any of them are deal breakers. Just points to pond…
Nice! I like the lyric particularly.
On this occasion I don't think the AI got the music quite right. I'd like it to be a bit more driving beat than atmospheric. More like the verses where's there's some tension and build up.
And to …
Lovely. Sad and sweet. That chorus works particularly well, though my favorite line is probably:
It's all I can do to fake it day to day
Gave me a similar vibe to Pink Floyd, Another Brick in the Wall. Don't mean it sounded like it, just the mood / vibe.
Music definitely has a machinery / factory feeling. Clearly a good fit to the lyric.
Very dark! Gets the message acr…
I like the music. Especially the drums. Cool vibe.
I found it difficult to hear the words clearly - maybe that's intentional, not sure, but seems a waste if you can't understand them. I will admit that my ears aren't the best though! BTW wo…
As always, really strong mood and atmosphere, almost cinematic.
Self-reflective and honest, almost raw.
I love the music on this one too.
Wonderful work.
The techno synth sound is spot on for this lyric.
let's hope the lyric isn't prophetic, but it certainly lays out some of the risks associated with AI.
Very well written, Bill.
Nice! I particularly like the new outro and ending on your hook and title!
Wonderful! Never heard the original, but this knocks it out of the park!
Great job!
Well I reckon we can all relate to this one! Fact of modern life!
My only suggestion would be to vary line 3 in the chorus before returning to "running a race we’ll never win." to finish.
Otherwise, looking good!
I like this, but I found it a bit of a jolt from v1 to the lift/chorus. The switch to a relationship theme caught me off guard. Didn't feel like a natural progression. I wonder if you wouldn't be better off swapping V1 and V2? That would put the …
Yes, trance like music. That seems like a good fit to the lyric!
My favorite lines here are:
What good are my dreams
if there are no skies to place them in?
The message I get from it is about dreams f…
Magnificent scenery! No wonder you were inspired by that!
The production already sounds very good. My only suggestion would be maybe experiment with some piano flourishes here and there in the upper register, it's all fairly low there at th…
Holds together nicely. Good structure. Classic relationship song. And no reason why it shouldn't work in Country.
A couple of editing things:
Cough a glimpse > Caught a glimpse
Our eyes pulled together as if to be magnetized …
Nice! I'm imagining this sung by Harry Connick Jnr (which may be utterly different to what you had in mind I know!).
I like the dense syllable count in the lines. Should lead to something interesting!
Flows well, nice jaded emotions. …
Thanks Chris! Planning to try it out on a live audience at the end of the month.
Good sound Tom.
I didn't know the story, and I wouldn't have pieced it together from the lyric. What I did get was the sense of a personal story of someone standing by their beliefs.
Spider Maya is the gift that keeps on giving! Classic rocker, and lovely to hear something from you Chris.
Enjoyed that a lot!
Line that caught me was "I was only window shopping and you can guess the rest"
@ElvisNash Elvis, did you mean to post this here? You might be better off contacting them directly.
Gotcha! Thanks for the clarification :)
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