Comments
-
Link: https://suno.com/song/e2c277e2-a5a2-401e-9e0f-587c2ad0721e
"I’m on the wrong side of righteousness." that's a lovely line! And the…
-
Not a fan of what Suno's done with it, but I think the lyric works quite well.
My favorite line was:
You can’t be a saint, but you can be a man
-
I’m dancing in the breeze hanging by a thread
Yep, that's a good line!
Like the guitar work on this too, gives it a city feel.
Good stuff! :)
-
Yep, that works! My favorite lines:
Whiskey for my breakfast, hate in my bloodstream.
Had a Bible in the glovebox, dust thick as sin,
-
Try to keep new posts to 1 per day please Elvis. The boards are pretty light at the moment, but that's the policy.
-
I like this one! Some great lines in there:
Cheap smiles and a gospel on Twitter,
We trade our souls for likes and views,
Then drink it down with cheap-ass booze.
Ouch! Punching hard!
Good write…
-
Like it! Upbeat and catchy. I can imagine plenty of people singing along with this one!
Good write!
-
What a wild ride! I really like this. haven't heard anything like it before, but but I'd be happy to hear more. really interesting fusion and combo of styles.
-
Love it! Love your voice in this too, the slight rasp works in your favor here.
This one hits hard. Great song Elvis!
-
Not altogether convinced of this one. The glass floor/ceiling feels at odds with the relationship part to me.
Glass ceiling / glass floor is a nice symmetry. I'm not exactly sure what a glass floor is or why I'd be afraid of one, but it sou…
-
Well what came out is all about the sound, though it does feel like a good fit to the lyric.
But in terms of nonsense lyrics, I was listening to "Blinded by the light" yesterday. The lyric there is just for rhymes, but what a song!
-
Good lyric and came out well! Like it a lot. My only suggestion would be in the chorus, I think
Prayin’ for mercy but hell don’t care
might sound better, but you'd need to find an alternate line 2 then as well.
Lyric is solid, and that certainly makes it easier for tools like Suno to do their job. Makes for an easy listen!
I've come across Puddles before. As you say, great voice, and quite a stage presence too! Good luck to him!
Well, I'm no kid, but even I've heard of Mr Rogers, though we never saw him here in Australia.
Bitter edge to this that I think will be very popular. Strong lyric. The music is good, though I'd like it to build more as the song progresses, …
All about the sound for me in this one. Nothing wrong with the lyric, but it's secondary, and that's just fine.
And the sound works great! I don't know the genre, but I love the bassline and the vocal harmonies. And the synth and drums are …
Don't forget to leave comments for others. We ask you to write two comments for each song you post yourself.
This is a good song Elvis. I think you're communicating really effectively what depression is like. I love that opening line:
I wake up with the sunrise, but I’m still in the night
I hope you heal soon. This real…
I can't say I actually enjoyed this one, but I do think there's an edge to the music that's a good fit to the lyric.
And I liked these lines:
I eat so I don't smoke
I smoke so I don`t eat
Per…
Don't think I ever saw Star Blazers, but I can see why it appeals to you!
Excellent lyric! Really like that, and Suno has done a great job with it.
Let's hope it gets out there. Good message.
Deserves to be used on a cartoon in this genre. Delightfully kitsch!
The music is the highlight for me, that sounds really tight.
The lyric is fine, but a tad generic. But I feel like the emphasis is on the sound anyway in this song, and there it's strong.
Gives me a vampire vibe! That dark mood to the music makes a love song into something else!
Love the combo! That's a wild ride! Almost a soundscape.
Really creative and interesting.
I think it works. I quite like the faster verses. Nice contrast with the the chorus.
I don't know Jelly Roll, but it's obviously a person, so anyone can look it up if they need to!
Cool song regardless!
Can you get Suno just to change that one phrase without redoing the whole song? I'm not saying you should - that's up to you. But I have a feeling that functionality exists now.
Very theatrical. I can imagine this playing in a movie soundtrack as the heroes step inside a building drawing guns for a shoot out - all in slow motion.
Definitely works in this style.
Beautiful words! And the song came out really nicely as well. It's beautiful to listen to.
My only suggestion is not to use "Val Kilmer" in the lyric. Just say "My last request" as if from his perspective. Keep the title and people will wor…
Howdy, Stranger!