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I like how this starts. But when it gets to "It's getting harder to reconcile" (and similar later on) it feels like it should go stronger and more upbeat to me, whereas it goes quieter. But just one opinion I realize.
Lyrically I'm afraid I…
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Indeed! But you have to go back a long way to find that common ancestor!
I like the variations in the chorus.
I think the rhythm really carries it along
Yes ,nice outro there too.
Good stuff.
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I like the contrasts, the soaring female vocals, the deep gravelly male vocal, the choir and the synths.
But it still feels whole and integrated. As a style I think it works well.
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Nice to see Linda back, and doing a fine job! And of course underpinned by Dr. Pepper and His Soda Pop Orchestra.
Really enjoyed that, and feels genuinely of the era.
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I like the message. Sitting around counting time is no way to live!
Doesn't feel quite as smooth as some of your others. A few syllables awkward in places. Course that could just be Suno.
"Dreams like old tattoos, some don’t ever go."…
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Ah! I was wondering what the language was, hadn't gotten to looking into it.
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This is good Elvis! Some lovely lines in there, too many to repeat, but the first one that caught my eye was:
He wore confidence like a leather holster
The mood is gritty and down to earth, but some of the phras…
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Very nice love song, assuming the translation got it right, and I have no reason to think it wouldn't.
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I've never had that urge! And these days everyone should be glad for that!
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"One of these nights I’ll face that face,"
I like that!
I don't think it's a dud. That Chorus 2 sure wen''t funny, but obviously that won't matter if you re-record it.
Yeah, we get to a certain age and star…
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Interesting. Points to ponder there.
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Lot of bitterness coming across in this, which I'm sure is quite deliberate.
I'd have to be in the mood to listen to this one. I think it's a quality song, but I'm not sure it's one I like to hear. But for anyone who has experience…
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Could be straight out of that era! Gee that came out well. Suno is a wonder, but you gave it a lovely lyric to work with. And of course Linda sings it beautifully!
Good stuff!
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Yeah that comes thru all right. Got a raw and real feel to it. Glad you're still with us to tell the tale!
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And as always, yours is the answer that matters!
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Wrong link? Takes me to "Heart to Heart" by James Chiang?
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Well for me this works a treat. Story feels really tight and all it makes sense now.
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Nice version! Now we need to hear the alternative :)
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Love to hear your voice! Nice track Elvis.
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Makes me think gypsy or hungarian (or both!). Nice modern take on it.
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"Money never sleeps" is a great hook, and the music is a strong fit to it.
I'm wondering if there is a way to show how he is chasing money. Is he driving trucks all night long? Is he gambling? I think it might be stronger if it cou…
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I'm not sure about this one, though it always pays to hear it first.
First thing is the word wisdom is used a lot. Could pay to get out the thesaurus, or try rephrasing a line or two.
Second is that although it's about wisdom, I didn'…
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Ok got it. Thanks!
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I don't personally know what a "dashboard devil" is, but the song still works!
I like the devil vs angel references sprinkled throughout. Sounds like he's a bit of a devil himself!
Strong sense of place and mood.
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Would you mind posting the lyrics here on TSF along with the link to your songs?
I understand that lyrics may be secondary for some EDM songs but it does make it easier to comment on them.
Vocals seem a bit muddy in the mix to me.
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Good vibe! Enjoyed that.
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Sometimes it just that moment too. You look at something from a different angle and all of a sudden it looks weird or funny.
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Thanks for sharing this Elvis! Not sure that method works for me, but I'm quite interested in hearing about it, and it may do for others. Appreciated.
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What inspires you Elvis? Any tips for those of us struggling to come up with things to write about?
Re this song:
Heart full of fire, bed full of heat
that's a great line!
Here: "And a kiss that’ll p…
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Link: https://suno.com/song/e2c277e2-a5a2-401e-9e0f-587c2ad0721e
"I’m on the wrong side of righteousness." that's a lovely line! And the…
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