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I can see the Carroll link. I am the wombat brings to mind I am the walrus.
Even with your guidance I can't interpret the verses!!
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I can't get into these. I try for meaning, and it's just sound to me. But that says more about me than the song!!
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Certainly got those abstract / highly interpretive lyrics like Dylan. Not sure what it is saying though! Maybe it's one just to relax into and hear rather than try to understand.
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The year 3000? Anything could happen by then!
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There's always room for another Christmas song! Does this qualify as one? Not sure, but I enjoyed it anyway! A completely different Christmas story.
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Love the melody at: "Want love, sweet love forever love don’t be shy"
It's both a modern story and an age old one. Desperate for love is a classic theme, but posting online makes it modern.
There's a warmth to what you've written. Wan…
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An interesting result! Well, I guess it pays to experiment!
Not my cup of tea I'm afraid, but hey, you're getting views!
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Interesting! Thanks for the update Elvis!
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I like the lyric! Got a nice tongue in cheek feel to it. Or perhaps a little cynicism? Either way I like it!
The melody doesn't feel quite as strong to me. It didn't stick in my mind afterwards. Easy to listen to as it played, but then it w…
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Thanks for sharing those! They hit hard. they're not quite as upfront in the song. Glad we get to appreciate them!
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Please remember to post the lyrics here on TSF as well as the link to your song.
Nice! I think you got the moody and smooth down nicely!
Maybe an occasional cut thru sound like a triangle just to spice it up?
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Has a feeling of joyousness and innocence to it that's probably at odds with the lyric! Nice sound though.
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Fair enough! 50 tries requires real perseverance and dedication.
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Nailed that style! This could easily be of that era. Lyric and music both.
Enjoyed my listen!
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Can never see that title without thinking of Cat Stevens / Yusuf - even though they are completely independent songs.
Love that intricate violin! I like the combo of heavy rock and orchestral instruments.
Those verses feel so intimate…
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Wow! What a detailed and complicated prompt. Amazing that it can generally follow it, and good on you for being able to create it!!
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That music is a great fit to a lullaby. As are the various choir elements you are using.
Are you using the original melody or just prompting Suno with your own style here?
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I like the jaunty vibe to it, but I don't really understand it!
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Good that the vocals are clear in this one - the lyrics are important.
Love these lines - they really bite:
From mournful eyes
A sorrow river runs
Powerful chorus! And some really dramatic dynamics ac…
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Like how you start with just vocal and single guitar. Really works for that "peaceful" feel
"I've got ... blue skies in the morning" - that's really nice. Love how that comes in. The harmonics are good there too.
Now vocal harmonies. …
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Not sure this one is coming off. Feels a bit chaotic to me. Not really a strong story line, but no memorable hook either.
I don't think the musical style suits your brand either.
But just an opinion!
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Merry Christmas Mora! [Assuming you can read this! 😉 ]
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That chorus works particularly well. Good sound!
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Yes, they both work. Individual preference I guess. Mine is the original too! :)
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It's a good one Mora! Kept my attention focused all the way through.
It's funny, your title got clipped here to "Tea" rather than "Tears", but I think that would make an equally fascinating title! Though perhaps a little less dark.
En…
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I like your choice of chords for the music, and the general mood and tone is a good fit to the lyric.
Let's hope it turns out that way!
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"Same old over-tired, over-tried line ..." that's a really nice phrase and it sounds good too.
This one has a more commercial feel to it. I don't mean that negatively, more like something you might hear on the radio.
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I think any issues with the English might be something we can help you with, if you'd like that kind of help. As a non-native speaker, you seem very fluent already!
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The double meaning is nice. Let the listener interpret. thanks for the explanation! :)
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Love the funky vibe! Keys are very nice. Agree about the drums, but an easy fix.
Feels like a good match to the lyric too.
Would you mind including the lyrics here on TSF when posting your songs? Makes it much easier to comment on tho…
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