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I can so imagine this going down a treat at an open mic or something like that.
Just fun to listen to!
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"She don’t dig through the wreckage of me" oh that is lovely!
There's a softness to the music that fits the lyric like a glove.
"I don’t cross old names" maybe "I don’t cross old flames"?
"Close to her, far from me" nice! Like …
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What I get from this is numbness, almost like shock. Inability to process.
It is wonderfully atmospheric, and yet the driving beat gives it energy too. Lovely contrast to the vocal.
I think you've done particularly well on this track.…
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Lovely to hear this built out the way you no doubt imagined it originally. It's a really good sound.
I can also image this done in a slow, sad way too.
Good stuff. 😁
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Too long since I heard your voice Chris! Love this, and love the sound.
And that's some decent guitar playing you're doing too!
Trouble with being no one is it leaves only the brown tongues talking!
Great song!
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Interesting story!
I really like these lines:
Said, “I’ve seen saints do worse than this
With a Bible and a sword”
I think if you're doing a live version of this you need a pause after son as in "Son …
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I like the song, but I don't like the title. The lyric is all about the Moon. Why not call it Moonstruck or something like that instead?
And these lines don't work
But, the star she thought she found
Turned out to be …
I wonder if it might be a tighter start if you reverse the first two lines?
Travel under cover of night
Trying to run and hide
I feel like the chorus could make more out of the long arm of the law. In what …
Wow! Doesn't a full accompaniment make a difference? Love the flute in the intro, but all the instruments add to it.
The music is quite laid back, atmospheric. Feels like looking at a landscape, which makes it a great match for your lyric!<…
It is catchy. I didn't get the relevance of the middle 8 to the rest of the lyric, but it certainly sounds good. It's fairly light, but then some songs are and no worse for that.
Hi Paulina! Lovely to hear from you.
It's a wonderful song, and I enjoyed your version of it. (Good clean recording too!)
Not surprised to hear you're getting requests to sing it!
This is wonderful! So sad and evocative. Love the opening verse with its visuals, and it just stays good all the way through.
And Suno has picked up the power in it. Good match there too.
One to be proud of!
Definitely rich in symbolism! But I have to disagree with your other comments: plenty of abstract there, and "Yesterdays are tomorrows are todays" feels profound to me!
Very dynamic piece. Felt like it upped the tempo during the song is th…
Love the bluesy sound. And you're good at these outlaw type songs.
I like "Hunters and Gatherers" as a title and hook. It doesn't really drive the lyric though. You've got "Gettin’ by on what we find" and "Still standin’ in the rain", as ex…
This one doesn't really do it for me. Feels a little bland.
The lines seem a little uneven across verses, some longer/shorter
Not sure about a flood coming down the mountainside. Maybe that happens, but it feels wrong.
Cool sound. Feels like something that could be playing in the background at a club or something like that.
Right in the pocket for a pop song!
Lots of people are going to empathize with this one! I know I do!
I love how you varied the line @ "No I can’t remember names but I remember stories". Nice! And a great line in it's own right.
And the harp hits hard, especially the o…
laying it all out on the table with this one Elvis!
Lot of truth here. Love the real bluesy sound.
Good stuff.
Love the Tongue in Cheek of this one! And the music is so upbeat!
It certainly is good fun. And catchy enough that people could just sing the chorus and miss the whole point!! Maybe you sell it to Amazon?
Good stuff Tom!
The lyric feels sad to me. Her existence an escape rather than a joy.
With that in mind, I think the first version gives that contrast with the sadder feel to the music. But I do like the duet. Don't know how instructable Suno is, but a due…
Yep this works. A bit exaggerated maybe, but I think that what the song calls for.
Music feels like a good fit for it.
I like the generational thing in the bridge, talking to his son. Gives the song a purpose.
Maybe: "do what I …
Good lyric! Empathy angels is a really evocative phrase.
Got a gritty and real feel to it.
One suggestion: "outlaws' feels a bit self aggrandizing in this context. Maybe "outcasts" or "rogues" or something like that instead?
That chorus is very strong.
It's got a poetic style to it, the meaning feels a bit hidden. One to ponder on perhaps.
The "cover" feature is my favorite function of Suno. You still get the joy of writing both lyric and music, but you (hopefully) get a better version than you could do yourself. I note your points about the style though Chris. And I have to add th…
Like this a lot. Like how the post chorus gives us the truth.
It's got attitude the whole way through.
Very good indeed.
I hear it as a set of different scenes and in each one something coming atcha
Always enjoy your guitar work!
Nice song. Enjoyed my listen.
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Some foot tapping rhythm there. Seems like a good fit to the lyric.
Not sure this one is coming off, or at least it's not working for me.
I'm not getting either a storyline or an emotion from it. At the end of it, I'm not sure what it is about or why I should care.
There is a lot of change and dynamic…
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