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One thing I'll say is that for 20 years TSF has been run as a service to others. Part of that includes making it available free of charge, rather than running it as a commercial site. It's unreasonable to ask anyone to take it on and continue it …
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Ah there's a sound I've missed. Not going to critique, just enjoy it!
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Love the chorus!
I also like the poetic nature of the lines in the verses, but collectively they're not saying much to me. But they do have an atmosphere though. V3&4 seem a bit more cohesive in that they seem to be about travelling and…
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Lot's of emotion packed into this. Anxiety, vulnerability, isolation. It's a psychological study.
Show them your best Pokerface
Great opening line! There's the entire context right there. And sets up the "bets a…
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Well this one feels very appropriate at the moment!
Great song Sid! Love to see you posting :)
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Elvis, please check my PM
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That's a kind offer Elvis. But you need some IT background to a run a site like this.
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Elvis, I'm removing the link for language reasons, but leaving the lyric.
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Thanks for the suggestion Elvis, but money isn't an issue.
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One song per day Elvis. I'm putting this one on hold for 12 hours
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I love both the premise and the cynicism of this one!
Preacher on the corner with a tap-to-save sign,
Ouch!
Suno's given you a fairly standard sort of song, but I understand it's a placeholder for someone r…
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@IronKnee Limited info Tom, I'll PM you.
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Don't forget there is a posting limit of one new song per day.
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It's a cool idea. We all have an interest in money!
Like the way they are talking back to you too!
The chorus and verses sound very similar to me melodically. Would be nice to have a little more separation there.
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I think you've done well with the prompting to get the deep echoing voice, the bass drum and portentous music as backing. Feels very appropriate.
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I think you've got something to work with here, but it feels incomplete to me. So far we have the line:
You made fun of me then damn
and that's the only example of stomping we get. I think another verse with more…
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This is a thread about Marsha's song. Let's try to keep it on track.
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Always enjoy your guitar style and melodies, Tom! Honestly, I could just get lost in the sound of it!
Bit of a comment on the general malaise of humanity as well as specifically the cyberspace threat.
The religious references will app…
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Well, see what other comments you get! Could be just me. Do you post these on other sites too? Good to get a range of opinions.
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Interesting choice of musical style. I can imagine this working as more hard rock too.
What I'm getting from this is intolerance against a trans woman, particularly in the context of the church. A religious person, perhaps someone who consi…
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It's a really interesting premise. The idea that some relationships are predestined and just waiting to happen.
I think your "But we haven’t met yet" line lands really well in the song. You've explained it up front here in this post, but in…
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I hadn't heard. He was such a talented man!
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For me it was unsettling. It felt more like an outer representation of inner demons, and for that reason it didn't feel as creepy as if it was something external, but certainly disturbing.
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Your signature guitar style and melodies are all over this!
It's a reflective, honest song without feeling self-indulgent.
You might try a tiny pause after the 2nd line in each verse, just a bar to hold it a touch. Except maybe the la…
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Not sure I get horror from it. It made me think of someone with a psychosis.
But I think it gets you in, certainly kept my attention!
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Nice groove! Got into that straight away.
Seems like it's meant to be provoking. Lines like "I don't eat meat until the animal is dead".
Not sure what it's about though!
Do you even know the nighttime from a hole in th…
It's an intriguing concept, and I love the "we should let no flower pass us by" line.
Not sure it works as a song though, or at least the spoken format doesn't do it for me. I would rather read it as a poem.
I like this Elvis. The demon angels is a nice angle and you've made the most of it. I like how you describe the various types to explore the idea. And some lovely lines there, like the first one: "There’s a shadow in the corner where the bottle u…
Has a theatrical vibe to it. I can imagine a musical comedy using this. The music has a whimsical feel to it.
I reckon "numerological dream" might fit somewhere in there - at least thematically!
It's a wild ride! But an enjoyable one …
Not bad. Definitely easy to listen to.
Only thing I'd point to is the switch between 1st and 2nd person. And that's no biggie. If it was deliberate, I'm not sure what that implies.
Howdy, Stranger!