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Very nice all around. The beautiful guitar and vocals deliver a perfect mood for the lyrics. I like the part about the baby. It elevates the story from another, 'she left me, and I miss her'. I enjoyed the listen very much.
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It's a fun and humorous song with some great lines. The hook is really good. The music feels upbeat which works perfectly with the lyrics. I enjoyed the listen! Cool song :)
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I really like the hook. It is memorable and used perfectly in the lyrics. This sould make a super fun song!
IMO, it works better if the woman is actually a 'looker'. Gorgeous on the outside, but ugly inside. It fits better with him describi…
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It is so easy to get lost in the music and vocals. The emotion pours out and I feel it in your performance. A wonderful and captivating song. Beautiful!
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I think there is something emotionally touching in the lyrics. It sees this guy has lost his love, but is he trying to move on, or does he want to get her back? I think he is trying to prove his love to win her back, which is a great idea.
The music and vocals are so soothing and beautiful. Kind of entrancing, like a firefly. The lyrics tell a less peaceful story which is interesting. Wonderful images to paint this story.
This could have led to a happy ending where the firef…
I really like the whole vibe going on. It almost feels pulsating and alive. I like it!!
A quick thought on V1:
"Early morning angel waiting
Bed of curtains dirty floor
Living off regretful trusting
Purified the dev…
I love the message in your song. It is easy to get sidetracked during the holidays, but remembering the real reason is so important. I love the harmonica solo.
Super catchy and meaningful. Really nice Tom.
I can imagine wanting to leave for another world, and I guess we are all aliens to each other. It's a cool rocker. Love the music and vocals. Had me bopping in my chair. Good stuff!
The vibe of the music and vocals complements the lyrics perfectly. I like the theme. It is very relatable, and the delivery feels spot on. I enjoyed the listen very much.
Oh yeah, I had a thought on this line:
"And they'll never hear her footsteps fall inside their minds" Since you use the word 'fall' in the chorus. Maybe 'Creep inside their minds'? <…
I feel like there is this desperate longing to find one's true love, but then some of the language leads me to believe there already is someone specific he is wanting.
"Can a caged bird sing
Can a wallflower dance
Can stale win…
Wow Joseph, this is really great. I love the theme and the music and melody are excellent.
The idea that this enchantress is powerful, and evil comes through loud and clear. Plenty of imagery for me to picture what is happening as I liste…
Thanks Joseph, @icystorm ! I always appreciate your comments and thoughts. You are very kind :)
Thanks so much for your comments @popitup! I am so thrilled that you were moved by the Storm. Nathan knocked it out …
The music is really nice. It feels like a perfect fit for the lyrics. Nice vocals - I can feel the emotions in your voice. The solo is amazing!
A sad, yet relatable song, done very well.
I enjoyed it very much.
I am struggling with the lyrics because they seem so meaningful, but I can quite grasp it. This line is awesome "The promise of the albatross "! I love the visuals and the energy of the music. It feels urgent like a pursuit. Super cool vibe.
…I love the feel of the song. I like the lyrics and the vocals. The music is nice, but I would like to hear it more, especially the cello. It adds such a wonderful component to the vibe, and I think it would elevate the feel even more.
This is a very beautiful song. It feels honest and real, and I am sure many can relate to the lyrics. Your performance is wonderful, and the emotions in your vocals are strong. I enjoyed the listen very much!
Thanks for posting our song, Dominick! I have been singing it around my house during the holidays. Your melodies are so happy and catchy, and the end is perfection. I love it :)
I don't believe I heard this one before and I love it! Love the lyrics and the cadence of the vocals. Awesome music as usual. I am definitely in need of some positive vibes, and this delivers in spades. Good stuff Chris!
I enjoyed the listen. it is catchy and I like your performance. I would like to have the lyrics so I can read as I listen. It's a lovely song, but the end is abrupt.
Sorry to be a repeater, but I do l hear, and enjoy the Dylan vibe. Meaningful lyrics well done. I enjoyed the listen.
Merry Christmas and Happy Holiday to you and everyone here! So many lyrics and songs will be coming in 2023 - I believe :)
I remember this. A very fun song well done! Love the guitar solo - lovely.
Do darn pretty. I was mesmerized with guitar and the soft flow of vocals. Very lovely and enjoyable! Love it :)
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