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@RainyDayMan , @sidshovel _ thanks for the comments and scores. welp. I was going for mildly absurd. I had the idea to write a song silly and nonsensical to see if could get a low score.. in my head that made sense :)

"Bars Guitars And Cadillac Cars" Well you can't get more country than that! Nice rolling rhythm and rhyme to it.

The melody in the chorus is a little too similar to that in the verse for me. But that's my only crit. The rest is very smooth.

I like the little guitar licks that start at the end of the first chorus. I was thinking in the first two verses that they would fit nicely and in they came.

Bridge is nice. Nice clean finish.

Good stuff.

Kayla,

Maybe for the benefit of people like Elvis and I who struggle with the concept of abstract lyrics, you could establish some context at the beginning. Three or four lines at the start would help us grasp what the rest is about. I have no doubt the whole thing is clear in your mind but for the majority of others they are likely to struggle to appreciate what you are saying.

Sid

I like it. A good story, even if it's a well-worn path. It could maybe be condensed a little. It's a bit long at five and a half minutes.

Hi

Here is a new song i have done

Tried to get a modern Dua Lipa type feel

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Thanks for taking the time to Listen

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Cool tracks , I'm not getting the Beatles from this

Well there ya go , good luck

Hey there Yeahbuddy.... this is fine. love it. Put a big smile on my face.