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Re: How do we make magic happen on TSF?
You are most welcome to post comments or analysis of artists, or just a general "Hi" to the world here in the General Discussion area. Go ahead any time you want! But keep the Original Song… (View Post)1 -
Re: Athila
I got more and more into this as the song went on. Really like: He needed the light of their hopes like the flowers need the water You might consider: despite his hand stained :: still his hand stain… (View Post)1 -
Re: What do we think about AI Generated Music?
Sid, take a deep breath. You are not being personally attacked here, even if it feels that way. This is a contentious topic. I remind everyone to remain respectful towards others. The site rules for … (View Post)2 -
Re: really said goodbye. lyrics only
Good strong emotions here, that's important. Good narrative, and I like how v1 gets us straight into the picture and heart of the story. I like the idea of we pretended we'd meet again versus we actu… (View Post)1 -
Re: She needs to feel loved again
You might want to move the bridge later in the song after you have introduced the "admirer". It's not a big issue, but the "he" in the bridge makes more sense after reading that p… (View Post)1
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