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Re: On the wings of the crows
Might be interesting to try stopping the instrumentation at "silence" to really emphasize that, then bring it back in. I particularly like "Black and white merged" referring to th… (View Post)1 -
Re: The Hallway
Love the lyric. As an example, this line: that I loved you behind them all I'm less keen on the melody in this one. It felt a little indistinct to me. At the end of it, I couldn't remember how it wen… (View Post)1 -
Re: With the air of a sigh
Yes, trance like music. That seems like a good fit to the lyric! My favorite lines here are: What good are my dreams if there are no skies to place them in? The message I get from it is about dreams … (View Post)1 -
Re: Bar Stool
Got a classic country feel to it. I think we can all picture ourselves on that bar stool! The music is a good match for the lyric. "It's my easy chair" - and that's the feeling I get from t… (View Post)1 -
Re: Her Gettysburg Address
Interesting feel to it, very laid back. I like the play on words with Gettysburg Address. Story feels half told to me, I would have liked to hear the second half - understand why you can't do that th… (View Post)1
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