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Re: My New song ...lost and found
I'm a bit lost here. Is that the lyric to the song you've posted or a comment about it? (View Post)1 -
Re: The Invisible Room
I love the evolution of the music over the song and the various styles. Lyrically, this part is my favorite: while yesterday and tomorrow perch on my shoulders like two beautiful birds hungry for my … (View Post)2 -
Re: Hold My Hand
Real punchy, driving sound with those cutting guitar riffs and stabs. Nicely done. And an awful thing for your wife to have experienced. Just for your consideration, you might play with a second voca… (View Post)2 -
Re: The loss of the Ira H. Owen - Lyrics & Song
Re this line: "the ships bell chimed softly, no one striking her though" I meant in terms of the number of syllables there. To me it feels like a squeeze to fit them all in. But you needn't… (View Post)1 -
Re: A Mariners Tale - Lyrics
A rollicking sailing story! Has the feel of a sea shanty, or perhaps a Lakes shanty in this case! 😉 Couple of suggestions: a bunch of young men was his crew -> a bunch of young men were his crew (… (View Post)1
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