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Re: Black Woman Glory
Very powerful language, well done. Loved how casually you dropped "everyday" into "Hearing the who shot who stories today, everyday" I found the lyric had the most punch where it … (View Post)1 -
Re: My pal sal
Has a curious childlike quality to it, though the language is clearly aimed at adults, as is the musical style you've chosen for it. Some lovely phrases like: neon's flowing wine And I like the rhymi… (View Post)1 -
Re: Bars Guitars And Cadillac Cars
"Bars Guitars And Cadillac Cars" Well you can't get more country than that! Nice rolling rhythm and rhyme to it. The melody in the chorus is a little too similar to that in the verse for me… (View Post)1 -
Re: "Sadies Bar And Grill "
Now that's painting a picture! I feel like I'm there with her. Good write! (View Post)1 -
Re: "Life-Train To Heaven" bluegrass
Here's a link directly to the song: https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13521914 Love the positive upbeat music. I can imagine this going down really well with the right audience. I saw your alternat… (View Post)1
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