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Re: Insufferable (Original Song)
I like the lyric very much. A little abstract and open to interpretation. The music doesn't seem to match the intensity of the words. Don't know if that is deliberate for contrast or just came out th… (View Post)2 -
Re: Just A Day Away!
Musically, I like what you've got so far. I like the intro, but I think it's too long, and you should get to what's currently the 35 sec mark in half that time. Lyrically, I'm not sure what this is a… (View Post)2 -
Re: Fool's Gold
Great groove there with some lovely guitar over it. Chorus rocks! Nice message, and the lyric flows well, but the music is the star for me! (View Post)1 -
Re: The Storm - collaboration with Nathan Gerry
I like that a lot! It's a strong lyric, and Nathan has done it justice with great music and a wonderful performance. Would love to hear this with a full production, but it sounds great already! (View Post)2 -
Re: Breaky Crayon Girl
Wonderful show with really good dialogue! I'm a fan myself. And how about "Once more with feeling"? I like this a lot. Especially "My scary veiny black eyed girl". Plenty of refer… (View Post)1
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