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Re: West Virginia
I like the specificity of it, the place names, and references to Katrina etc. Makes it feel grounded and real. But I find it hard to connect with. It may just be because I'm not from that area, but i… (View Post)1 -
Re: Oh no I'm not Yoko (new original)
A self-portrait in song! I particularly the refrain: So how could I be Yoko When I'm a butterfly How could I be Yoko When I'm floating in the sky? There's quite a few change ups in the song. You migh… (View Post)1 -
Re: HOME
Nice! Got a vibe going there. My only suggestion is to consider ending the chorus on "home" to link that back to your title and hammer it home. (View Post)2 -
Re: Reflections (By Alyssa Womack)
What a beautiful song. Every word cuts deep. It's so real and vulnerable and honest. And I think you've added to it considerably with the backing instrumentation. Thanks for sharing this one. (View Post)2 -
Re: New song...would greatly appreciate feedback.
I'm guessing the contrast between the upbeat music and the depressing lyric is very deliberate. The music has the "endless days of summer feel". I can't see any particular problem spots in … (View Post)1
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