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Re: The Emperor's New Wallet
@DullRoar would you mind including the lyrics with your post please? It makes it so much easier to review! I know they were in the video, but those disappear as they scroll past. I like the "con… (View Post)1 -
Re: The devil has blue eyes
[Verse] One look and I was smitten I was mesmerized by her. She held me in her power. I couldn’t look away from her. [Pre chorus] I had never known such beauty. Felt skin so satin smooth. When I kiss… (View Post)1 -
Re: 1984 Blues
You're definitely getting your message across!! Some nice lines there. 'A blowup doll your suitor" that made me giggle. I can enjoy this without needing to agree with you. (View Post)1 -
Re: Concrete Flower
This is really good. "Concrete flower" is a lovely image, sprouting out of the of the most difficult ground. Some lovely lines in there like: A temporary setback was the greatest comeback. … (View Post)1 -
Re: Living in Jubilation
That's a different musical vibe! Good on you for trying something new! Enjoyed that funky rhythm. I'd call it a Christian song. Phrases like 'Living in jubilation" and "This is the day the … (View Post)1
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