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Re: OH BABY I LOVE YOU (Uke)
I like it. I think the verses are stronger than the chorus at the moment. For the chorus I'd like to see some variation on the "I love you". Maybe you could ask "Do you love me too?&qu… (View Post)2 -
Re: The Angel Sang Lyrics
I like how the story unfolds in this one Kayla. There's a sense of completeness to it. I feel like the story ended rather than just stopped. I've no idea how it would be set to music. But it has a mo… (View Post)1 -
Re: Angels On The Radio (2023)
Its a strong track. I think you've got the mood right, contemplative and slightly sad. And I like the guitar breaks throughout. I'd like to hear you go bolder on the vocals - really sing it out. Feel… (View Post)1 -
Re: The Convergence
It certainly has attitude! A fed up, irate, frustrated attitude - so exactly what you were after! I think that chorus is strong. And I like the outro. :) You might try upping the drums in the mix. Co… (View Post)1 -
Re: West Virginia
I like the specificity of it, the place names, and references to Katrina etc. Makes it feel grounded and real. But I find it hard to connect with. It may just be because I'm not from that area, but i… (View Post)1
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