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Re: Long Arm of the Law
I think jgkojak has made it clear that he's heard your point and doesn't agree with it. There's no point labouring it, doesn't help anyone. (View Post)1 -
Re: What Stupid Does
Yep this works. A bit exaggerated maybe, but I think that what the song calls for. Music feels like a good fit for it. I like the generational thing in the bridge, talking to his son. Gives the song … (View Post)1 -
Re: smart
Don't forget to leave comments for others whilst you are here. We ask you to leave two comments on other people's songs for each one you post yourself. (View Post)1 -
Re: Nothing remains the same in memory except the taste of tears
It's a good one Mora! Kept my attention focused all the way through. It's funny, your title got clipped here to "Tea" rather than "Tears", but I think that would make an equally f… (View Post)1 -
Re: On the wings of the crows
Might be interesting to try stopping the instrumentation at "silence" to really emphasize that, then bring it back in. I particularly like "Black and white merged" referring to th… (View Post)1
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